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Consumption of the world’s resources (such as oil, fresh water, etc.) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are these causes of the increased consumption? What can people do to reduce it?
The world’s resources is divided into two categories which are inexhaustible (the resource will not run out in foreseeable future) and exhaustible (the resource has a limited quantity). Nowadays, the depletion of the nature’s resources like oil and fresh water has increased until dangerous rate. In this essay, I will state out some of the causes of the over-consumption and how people can contribute to reduce the over-consumption of the nature’s resources.
To begin, the main reason of increasing usage in world’s resources is the number of population. In general, the region with the higher population will use up more of the world’s resources. For example, oil is the main resources that are being used in the industrial sector and also our daily life such as transportation. Another reason is people are lack of awareness about limit of the exhaustible resources surrounding them. For example, for the nature to produce oil, it takes about hundreds of thousands years. But people just keep taking the oil without giving time to the nature to reproduce. It will cause the exhaustible resources completely disappear.
Some actions are need to be taken with the people cooperation for preventing these issue keep going on. First of all, they need to find an alternative resources. For example, these days, people are using solar energy or wind energy to be the electricity supply. Plant derived are being used to substitute gasoline for vehicle. Besides that, people also need to save the resources in many ways. For instance, turn off the electronic devices after usage.
In conclusion, I believe that we can overcome the depletion of nature’s resources by start using the alternative resources. However, the government also need to control the number of the population by creating a birth control policy. To overcome this issue is not easy and take certain period of time. However, we will be able to see the result in the future.
The world’s resources is divided into two categories which are inexhaustible (the resource will not run out in foreseeable future) and exhaustible (the resource has a limited quantity). Nowadays, the depletion of the nature’s resources like oil and fresh water has increased until dangerous rate. In this essay, I will state out some of the causes of the over-consumption and how people can contribute to reduce the over-consumption of the nature’s resources.
To begin, the main reason of increasing usage in world’s resources is the number of population. In general, the region with the higher population will use up more of the world’s resources. For example, oil is the main resources that are being used in the industrial sector and also our daily life such as transportation. Another reason is people are lack of awareness about limit of the exhaustible resources surrounding them. For example, for the nature to produce oil, it takes about hundreds of thousands years. But people just keep taking the oil without giving time to the nature to reproduce. It will cause the exhaustible resources completely disappear.
Some actions are need to be taken with the people cooperation for preventing these issue keep going on. First of all, they need to find an alternative resources. For example, these days, people are using solar energy or wind energy to be the electricity supply. Plant derived are being used to substitute gasoline for vehicle. Besides that, people also need to save the resources in many ways. For instance, turn off the electronic devices after usage.
In conclusion, I believe that we can overcome the depletion of nature’s resources by start using the alternative resources. However, the government also need to control the number of the population by creating a birth control policy. To overcome this issue is not easy and take certain period of time. However, we will be able to see the result in the future.