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THE FIRST PIE CHART BELOW SHOWS HOW ENERGY IS USED IN AN AVERAGE AUSTRALIAN HOUSEHOLD.THE SECOND CHART SHOWS THE GREEN GAS EMISSION WHICH RESULT FROM THIS ENERGY USE.
SUMMARISE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISON WHERE RELEVANT.

Given below are two pie charts showing how energy is expended and the also greenhouse emission from household in Australia. Overall, it is clear that heating consumed more energy than any other variables listed while water heating had the highest amount of greenhouse emission

To begin with, water heating is the second in pecking order for household energy use (30%) after heating (42%). Also, Refrigerator consumed 7% of energy while Lighting and cooling had a similarity, the latter having a 2% of energy and the former having a double amount. Other appliances stood at 15%

Turning to the greenhouse gas emission, water heating had more emission at 32% seconded by 28% for other appliances. Emission from heating is third among the list with 15% with refrigeration only shy of that amount by 1%.Emission from lighting stood at 8%,a figure doubling the amount it was used and lastly cooling at 3%, just a percentage more than the amount that was used.

Overall, more gas was emitted than the energy consumed.

[David.IELTS.Examiner]

Hello!

Pecking order refers to preference.

There is no evidence for the final sentence.

Overall, vocabulary and grammar are good.

All the best,
David