Writing task 2
Posted: Thu Mar 03, 2016 8:46 pm
Hi everyone,
can you please give some feedback to my writing? thanks!
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Advertisements show products so attractive to the audience make them to buy things that do not satisfy any need. Big companies have learnt how people think and they have taken advantage of it. The marketing departments are always researching the way to introduce new products to the public based on the appearance of the product but the usability is not important.
Many TV ads create an illusion explaining why a product must be bought it. Situations commercials on TV are made up and they are out of the reality, for example a depressed girl is shown due to she cannot buy a new brand doll but when finally her parents buy the doll she is instantly happy. Once people are convinced that they need to buy something base on false ideas they start to waste money in unnecessary things.
Media has a huge impact in the society and they are working together with big companies in order to increase sells. The consumer is constantly receiving information about goods and services from many ways such as newspapers, street ads, radio and magazines, the repetition of a message is the key and the message is very clear: “you have to spend your money”. The combination of media and companies are changing the people’s shopping habits.
In conclusion, companies has lost the north and they are not trying to offer what the marketing need, they are only selling what they want to produce and induce the customer to buy it. We as a customer must be aware of this and do not follows the companies’ tricks.
can you please give some feedback to my writing? thanks!
Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Advertisements show products so attractive to the audience make them to buy things that do not satisfy any need. Big companies have learnt how people think and they have taken advantage of it. The marketing departments are always researching the way to introduce new products to the public based on the appearance of the product but the usability is not important.
Many TV ads create an illusion explaining why a product must be bought it. Situations commercials on TV are made up and they are out of the reality, for example a depressed girl is shown due to she cannot buy a new brand doll but when finally her parents buy the doll she is instantly happy. Once people are convinced that they need to buy something base on false ideas they start to waste money in unnecessary things.
Media has a huge impact in the society and they are working together with big companies in order to increase sells. The consumer is constantly receiving information about goods and services from many ways such as newspapers, street ads, radio and magazines, the repetition of a message is the key and the message is very clear: “you have to spend your money”. The combination of media and companies are changing the people’s shopping habits.
In conclusion, companies has lost the north and they are not trying to offer what the marketing need, they are only selling what they want to produce and induce the customer to buy it. We as a customer must be aware of this and do not follows the companies’ tricks.