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Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2016 2:59 pm
Home schooling belongs to the past and it is unacceptable in the modern society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, due to competition among students many concerned parents want to enroll their children in one of the best schools which provides quality education. Therefore, only a handful of parents come forward to teach their wards at home either by themselves or arrange for a qualified tutor to make them get the best academic skills. I totally back up the argument and would throw some light in the following paragraphs why I think studying at school would be the best option rather than getting tutored by parents or private teachers at their residence.
First, schools always follow the syllabus prescribed by the board of education wherein students of different schools study the same subjects and read the same textbooks. In addition, examinations are also conducted at the same periods of the year giving rise to a uniformity among students. Thus, students get to read the best books and gain expertise in the subjects such a mathematics, science which would help them to study better when the reach the university lever. I feel when they are homeschooled ,most of the parents would not be religiously following the strict rules and regulations which schools usually do. In addition, if there are no examinations to test their progress, the students would take it easy and would not pay much attention in developing their academic skills.
Second, different teachers teach the students various subjects. Generally, those faculty members are not only well qualified but also good experienced professionals who tutor their pupils to excel in their subjects.
For example, only a skilled teachers ofmathematics can teach the students perfectly using their experience and knowledge when compared to a private tutor who would teach various subjects to the student at home. In such a situation, the parents should shell out some extra money and appoint more that two teachers who are specialized in various fields.
In conclusion, although some individuals who would prefer educating their children at their homes for their own good reasons, I firmly stick to my opinion that in today's developed world, studying at schools would be the best option because they would get systematic education under the umbrella of expert professionals.
In recent years, due to competition among students many concerned parents want to enroll their children in one of the best schools which provides quality education. Therefore, only a handful of parents come forward to teach their wards at home either by themselves or arrange for a qualified tutor to make them get the best academic skills. I totally back up the argument and would throw some light in the following paragraphs why I think studying at school would be the best option rather than getting tutored by parents or private teachers at their residence.
First, schools always follow the syllabus prescribed by the board of education wherein students of different schools study the same subjects and read the same textbooks. In addition, examinations are also conducted at the same periods of the year giving rise to a uniformity among students. Thus, students get to read the best books and gain expertise in the subjects such a mathematics, science which would help them to study better when the reach the university lever. I feel when they are homeschooled ,most of the parents would not be religiously following the strict rules and regulations which schools usually do. In addition, if there are no examinations to test their progress, the students would take it easy and would not pay much attention in developing their academic skills.
Second, different teachers teach the students various subjects. Generally, those faculty members are not only well qualified but also good experienced professionals who tutor their pupils to excel in their subjects.
For example, only a skilled teachers ofmathematics can teach the students perfectly using their experience and knowledge when compared to a private tutor who would teach various subjects to the student at home. In such a situation, the parents should shell out some extra money and appoint more that two teachers who are specialized in various fields.
In conclusion, although some individuals who would prefer educating their children at their homes for their own good reasons, I firmly stick to my opinion that in today's developed world, studying at schools would be the best option because they would get systematic education under the umbrella of expert professionals.