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Describe a popular Dish you enjoy making.

You Should say:
What this dish is
why you enjoy making it
When you usually make it --

You should say why it is popular dish in you country -

Hello!

Fluency - Good speed with few pauses. Sometimes pauses for effect.
Coherence - Good range of connectives, used correctly.
Vocabulary - Good range with some details.
Grammar - Good basic grammar, but only a few complex structures.
Pronunciation - Clear with good intonation. Some variance in speed (good!). Some stress (good!).

Overall, a good performance. Try to introduce a wider range of grammatical structures. You could also name a few of the spices. (You mention almonds as an ingredient.)

Well done!
David

Thank you so much