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Please assess my writing task2-protection of minority languages

Posted: Tue Dec 15, 2015 10:47 am
by jennylfm
As language such as english, spanish and mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages.What is your view of this practice?

With the wide use of some majority languages such as English, Spanish and Mandarin, many people worry that some other little well-known languages possibly go extinct. Therefore, in order to conserve these minority languages, a number of countries have taken actions. In my opinion, I think that this practice is a positive step and should be encouraged.

It is well-known that languages are one of essential parts of cultures, if one language dies out, the beliefs, values and traditions of this culture would disappear with the death of the language, therefore, protecting the languages, particularly for the minority languages, is necessary and extremely vital to keep the diversity of the cultures. Additionally, because of the importance of these little-known languages, any actions and strategies should be encouraged and supported. However, this method alone is not enough to ensure that these languages will not die out, other approaches should be taken into consideration.

The possible method is to encourage local people from these minority languages background to speak and use the language during their daily communication. With the widespread usage of other majority language specially for languages, a number of local and native speakers from these less-known languages are not willing and happy to speak their own language, resulting in that the population of speaking these minority languages become less and less, which is considered as one of vital reasons for the death of one language, if the local people can be encouraged to speak their own language rather than English, It would be extremely beneficial to protect these minority languages.

In conclusion, any actions and practices to preserve these minority languages should be encouraged and supported. I do hope that more and more countries can take steps to perverse these minority languages, meanwhile individuals also should join in the queue to make efforts for it.

Re: Please assess my writing task2-protection of minority languages

Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2015 7:30 am
by David.IELTS.Examiner
Hi Jenny!

Introduction - good

First main paragraph - Good ideas, grammar and vocabulary.

Second main paragraph - Good, but that second sentence is terribly long!

Conclusion - 'perverse' should be 'preserve' - quite a funny mistake!

Overall, a very good essay with plenty of good grammar and vocab. Well done!
David

Re: Please assess my writing task2-protection of minority languages

Posted: Wed Dec 16, 2015 8:47 am
by jennylfm
Hi David,

Thanks for your time to read my writing and your comments. With your help, I can feel that I am making progress for my writing. Honestly, every time when I post my writing here, I feel very worried and nervous that there are logical errors for my writing. Previously, I was not able to express my opinions very clearly. Since I share my writing here, that is your feedback which pushes me to think hard before my writing, I have to say that they are really helpful.

Thanks for your help again.. I will keep on practice.

Thanks,
Jenny