Writing Task 2. Please check my Introduction.

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Jasur
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Writing Task 2. Please check my Introduction.

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Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference.

Discuss both these views and your opinion.

My Intro:

It is believed by some idividuals that people can take preventative measures of world climate change. However, others think that the act of individuals is worthless and that can be more effected by governments and entrepreneurs. In my view, both people and governments are able to influence on it.
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Paul Davey
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Re: Writing Task 2. Please check my Introduction.

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Hi Jasur
Your introduction is pretty good, but we can polish it up a bit:
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