please assess my speaking -somthing you saved money to buy.

[allen_zhang]

sorry, I submmitted 5 pieces today.
that's all what I have practiced today.
I won't submmit any more in the near future. just hope someone can help me. you can just check any one of them and give your advice.
many thanks

http://www.ieltsnetwork.com/download/file.php?id=59

[OnlineEnglishTeacher]

sorry, I submmitted 5 pieces today.
that's all what I have practiced today.
I won't submmit any more in the near future. just hope someone can help me. you can just check any one of them and give your advice.
many thanks

"Only one who works"
"I had to do a sacrifice"
"it usually would"
"15 minutes or something like that"

Some reasonable English knowledge, however somewhat lacking fluency - probably could benefit from more speaking practice in English .

[saqibali]

I would like to emphasize on pronounciation> Try to be careful before you speak each word.