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jesus wrote:The diagram illustrates the two maps of an island, before and after establishing few facilities for tourism.(<--Reword to: "The diagram shows two maps of an island before and after establishing tourist facilities.") Unlike the past island, the area of 100 meters near the beach in recent island is highly developed rather than other side of it.(<--Reword to: "In particular, the area close to the beach has been highly developed.")

According to the given data, most of the area of island is now used for the settlement purposes, which is easily accessible through the establishment of a footpath. This footpath, however, is also the only way to reach the beach, where swimming is now encouraged. While some of the unused area of old island is now covered with the building of restaurant and reception, the further development is the road transportation.(<--Reword to: "A new restaurant and reception area have been built, and better road access added to the island.") Similarly, this road also leads visitors to the pier, which is established to access the boats, and boating is the main way to reach the island.

In short, it is recommended that the remaining area of island should be used for plantation.