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Nabeel wrote:Modern technology is now very common in most work places?(By Nabeel )
As a matter of fact that we live in bleeding state of art in technology, that is conspicuously ubiquitous everywhere meanwhile is crucial part of our daily life, that has immeasurable impact of technology on humanity than ever by different pragmatic implication in easy access to information, communication, and transportation features for instance, that they undergo and evolved in different stages of thriving technology throughout century.(<--This is one sentence. It is too long. Reword to: "Nowadays, we live in a technological world. Technology is a crucial part of daily life, and it is constantly changing and evolving.")

First let’s talk about the role of technology in capability of accessing to numerous amount of information in nowadays with the brilliant help of internet by connecting entire world.(<--Reword to: "The invention of the internet means we can access information immediately, and connect to the entire world.") To obtain information that is relevant to our subject instantaneously in everywhere, and every time as we want for example in education and bridging universities thoroughly by sharing their discoveries with each other at the same time getting their feedback for improving more and more and it be a source of widen our knowledge broadening while in past for aware those discoveries it takes ages to know even most time impossible to attain those discoveries.(<--This sentence is too long. I don't understand what you mean.)

Secondly by improving communication at this time we normally tasted our cutting edge technology such as using smart phones and computers with the help of myriad array of products of communication applications that they connect globe by net thoroughly, more efficiently and rectify our schedules according to our time, social Medias, and business for instance is the main feature of technology that we use on regularly basis by saving more time and more money in contrary in past for achieving those things normally with the help of animals such as horses and pigeons, that they required more time and more money with diligent work to obtain it ,besides the risk of lethal incidents during the process of communication.(<--This sentence is too long. I don't understand what you mean.)

Thirdly when it comes to the transportation, new technology paves the way to connect massive cities and vast distance more unequivocally much more efficiently than ever at right time that we adjust to our daily routines, obviously more economical with the help of new highways, rail roads, modern electric trains, air planes and huge ships as quickly as possible for business purpose or for commuting employs and simply for tourism while in past they use horses and camel ,wooden ships for transportation and to barter their goods but time , vast distances and natural disaster, they presence a real barrier for their trips meanwhile they risk in their lives for achieving these tortures, calamity trips.(<--This sentence is too long. I don't understand what you mean.)

At the end we observe and we found some intangible evidences that shading light on major pragmatic implications, thanks for advantages of technology in our life for making more convenient, safer, and much more economical than ever in past in numerous ways such as accessing to information to communication and transportation as quickly as possible all showing the potency of modern technology in our century and still thrives to thoroughly drip down in our human history.(<--This sentence is too long. I don't understand what you mean.)