Taks 1 - General - Request information about scholarships

[mhdganji]

Hi every body
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You are a student who wants to apply to Green Pines College. You are experiencing financial problems at the moment. Task: Write a letter to the Principal of the College, explaining your situation and ask for information

Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to ask about conditions and rules about students scholarships how to apply for them.
I am a high school student who likes to attend at Pine Green College for the next year to study a B.S. course in computer science. Unfortunately, due to my father death which happened just recently, our family suffers from financial problems at the moment. Therefore, I may not be able to pay for the full course and need a scholarship or fund to make it happen. I would like to obtain information about the following:
1) How students can benefit from a scholarship in Pine College
2) What is the maximum amount of money paid as scholarship to students
3) Is there any other fund or financial help available to students?
You can send me the above-mentioned information to me by email or fax. Naturally, I would like to receive the information at least a week ago from start of the next semester.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Faithfully yours,
Mohammad

[Flick]

You are a student who wants to apply to Green Pines College. You are experiencing financial problems at the moment. Task: Write a letter to the Principal of the College, explaining your situation and ask for information


Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to ask about conditions and rules about students scholarships how to apply for them.(<--Reword to: "I am writing to inquire about how to apply for scholarships and what criteria is required.")

I am a high school student who would like to attend Pine Green College next year to study Computer Science. Unfortunately, due to my father's death which happened recently, our family is experiencing financial problems at the moment. Therefore, I may not be able to pay for the full course and need a scholarship or funds to make it happen. I would like to obtain information about the following:

1) What is the maximum amount of money paid as a scholarship to students
2) Is there any other fund or financial help available to students?

You can send me the above-mentioned information to me by email or fax.(<--Reword to: "Please send me any information you have by email or fax as soon as possible.") Naturally, I would like to receive the information at least a week ago from start of the next semester.(<--Delete this sentence.)

I look forward to hearing from you.
Faithfully yours,
Mohammad