GT Writing Task 1 - Review needed
Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2015 11:21 am
Q: Write a reply letter to your team manager who has asked for improvement plans to make your company success.
You can write what is needed
How you intend to do it (means of doing) ;
how it will improve success of company.
Dear Mr. Roberto,
I read your email (dated 26/07/2015) with great interest, which asks for strategy that needs to be implemented in order to take our company to next level in market. First of all, your email has given us a sense of inclusiveness in the company. In my opinion, we need to implement a better marketing strategy and improve marketing skills of all employees.
These days presence of a company need to be felt in market to gain projects. In our company, we have a strong Engineering team which understands the needs of customers and they do make lot of improvisations to the product and service offering to meet their expectation. Our Human resource department ; Information & Communication Technology (ICT) ; Finance team & procurement team jointly contribute much to our company. But the area where we lack is exhibiting our company to potential clients. We need to build the confidence and trust of our prospective customers.
We need to implement a good marketing strategy. We have to hire an individual who has expertise and competency in this area. In addition to that, cross cultural training needs to be imparted to all employees. Since we deal a lot with international customers, appreciating each other’s culture is important to communicate sensibly. This will help team members to communicate efficiently to different departments of our clients.
Hope to see a good marketing strategy implemented in our company shortly, that benefits the company and all employees. Thanks for the opportunity provided to express our views.
Yours faithfully,
You can write what is needed
How you intend to do it (means of doing) ;
how it will improve success of company.
Dear Mr. Roberto,
I read your email (dated 26/07/2015) with great interest, which asks for strategy that needs to be implemented in order to take our company to next level in market. First of all, your email has given us a sense of inclusiveness in the company. In my opinion, we need to implement a better marketing strategy and improve marketing skills of all employees.
These days presence of a company need to be felt in market to gain projects. In our company, we have a strong Engineering team which understands the needs of customers and they do make lot of improvisations to the product and service offering to meet their expectation. Our Human resource department ; Information & Communication Technology (ICT) ; Finance team & procurement team jointly contribute much to our company. But the area where we lack is exhibiting our company to potential clients. We need to build the confidence and trust of our prospective customers.
We need to implement a good marketing strategy. We have to hire an individual who has expertise and competency in this area. In addition to that, cross cultural training needs to be imparted to all employees. Since we deal a lot with international customers, appreciating each other’s culture is important to communicate sensibly. This will help team members to communicate efficiently to different departments of our clients.
Hope to see a good marketing strategy implemented in our company shortly, that benefits the company and all employees. Thanks for the opportunity provided to express our views.
Yours faithfully,