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Posted: Sun Jul 05, 2015 7:20 am
We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in businesses, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used for in future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits??
For many years, humanbeing have been using physical labour at everything they do. However, since 21st century, the era of technology has come and people even control tonnes of heavy things with tiny remote control. There is no doubt that not only in future, even daily new cutting edge technologies are being invented and world is being computeralised.
First of all, as can be seen that virtually all organisations are conditional on using computer technologies. For instance, businessmen carry out their business with the help of computer for storing datas, word processing, internet and etc.
Additionally, computers are being installed into things such as houses, cars and so on. As an example, we consider smart cars which are in full control of itself and even it is able to take you to the desired destination when you are in deep sleep
Finally, banking on computers have its liabilities as well. Let us take into consideration that relying on computers is causing obesity. Consequently, due to that, overusing computers is the source of an issue of laziness. Therefore, people are utilizing computers to play virtual games, unusual chats, and virtual activities which shows people's contingency for less physical labour.
On the whole, for all above mentioned examples, it can be assumed that some facilities vitally depend on computers, thus this dependence must be directed to particular objects which would not impact on physical activities
For many years, humanbeing have been using physical labour at everything they do. However, since 21st century, the era of technology has come and people even control tonnes of heavy things with tiny remote control. There is no doubt that not only in future, even daily new cutting edge technologies are being invented and world is being computeralised.
First of all, as can be seen that virtually all organisations are conditional on using computer technologies. For instance, businessmen carry out their business with the help of computer for storing datas, word processing, internet and etc.
Additionally, computers are being installed into things such as houses, cars and so on. As an example, we consider smart cars which are in full control of itself and even it is able to take you to the desired destination when you are in deep sleep
Finally, banking on computers have its liabilities as well. Let us take into consideration that relying on computers is causing obesity. Consequently, due to that, overusing computers is the source of an issue of laziness. Therefore, people are utilizing computers to play virtual games, unusual chats, and virtual activities which shows people's contingency for less physical labour.
On the whole, for all above mentioned examples, it can be assumed that some facilities vitally depend on computers, thus this dependence must be directed to particular objects which would not impact on physical activities
