Questions in my writing practice
Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2015 4:38 am
Hi, I won't post the whole essay. Instead, I will post every question I find in my daily writing practice. Thanks in advance if there is somebody to answer my questions.
1. entertainment news, mostly involved with gossip of stars, are .......
Could we use the verb in the form " , .... , " ?
2. news has close connection with its viewers' lives and consequently reading and watching news wastes no time
Is that the 'wastes' in here acts as a verb?
3. ....would benefit people more in the foreseeable future.
is this a right way to use the word 'more' ?
4. .....air travel facilitate the comunnication in the long distance.
I don't feel this sentence is good enough, is there any better word to describe the long distance?
5. Can I use ‘severely destroyed’? or is 'destroyed' equal to 'severely damaged'?
6. fossil fuels for military use serves only one purpose, to win the war.
is this the right way to use comma?
7. Air travel should not be limited and the accusation of its negative impact is not ture.
is this the right way to use word ' accusation' ?