Writing Task 2 Academic
Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2015 5:03 pm
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Topic Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for the each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment
Answer
It has been suggested that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. not everyone will agree with the statement. In this essay, I will discuss both the views before giving my opinion.
There are many good reasons that can compel anyone to support fixed punishment. Firstly there are fixed punishment people will fear of breaking a law, also there will be no chance to escape. As a result people will think twice before commit a crime. If there have impartial juzzment without getting biased crime will reduce substantially. Secondly in fact of the cases need to take short time to dispose off. Another important point is that there should no chance of corruption and Mal practice. The criminals and the culprits will not get any chance for the bad or evil.
However, many experts are totally against the fixed punishment. They have several logic to support their stand. Fast and foremost in fixed punishment many innocent people might be punished without any involvement they are not to be juzzed. Beside this accidental death or Manslaughter are never taken into account. for example, Friends are going on a hunting. But accidentally one of them shout but it hit in his friend's head. Unfortunately he spot dead. This is an accident. In this case the law may be considered. Another more there is no chance of self defense. No one can escape from the justice. Last but not least there is no scope of rectification. A man can be changed if his mind turn around the peace. One chance may be given to rectify himself who commits the crime.
After analyzing both sides i opine that there should not be fixed punishment because it is inhumane. However, there can be fixed punishment for heinous crimes against humanity.
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Topic Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for the each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment
Answer
It has been suggested that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. not everyone will agree with the statement. In this essay, I will discuss both the views before giving my opinion.
There are many good reasons that can compel anyone to support fixed punishment. Firstly there are fixed punishment people will fear of breaking a law, also there will be no chance to escape. As a result people will think twice before commit a crime. If there have impartial juzzment without getting biased crime will reduce substantially. Secondly in fact of the cases need to take short time to dispose off. Another important point is that there should no chance of corruption and Mal practice. The criminals and the culprits will not get any chance for the bad or evil.
However, many experts are totally against the fixed punishment. They have several logic to support their stand. Fast and foremost in fixed punishment many innocent people might be punished without any involvement they are not to be juzzed. Beside this accidental death or Manslaughter are never taken into account. for example, Friends are going on a hunting. But accidentally one of them shout but it hit in his friend's head. Unfortunately he spot dead. This is an accident. In this case the law may be considered. Another more there is no chance of self defense. No one can escape from the justice. Last but not least there is no scope of rectification. A man can be changed if his mind turn around the peace. One chance may be given to rectify himself who commits the crime.
After analyzing both sides i opine that there should not be fixed punishment because it is inhumane. However, there can be fixed punishment for heinous crimes against humanity.
Thanks for Reading this bullshit