Help with writing Task 2, Academic
Posted: Mon Mar 09, 2015 2:19 am
I wonder anyone can provide me with some feedback.
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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
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People are born with different characteristics to grow up with some certain mentality and personality. However, there are other circumstances and conditions of living that may have a huge impact on how people grow up and develop.
Certainly, individuals are born with many body and mind differences of each other. This could be scientifically known in biology as genetics that may inherited by individuals from their ancestors. For example, most well-known musician, such as Beethoven and Mozart, are born in musician families. Therefore, I think that talented people usually inherit their characteristics from their previous generation who belong to.
However, if some capabilities and resources are made available for some people, they would have a huge impact on them. To illustrate a good education system that could influence student and does include some creative classes such as music and sport may likely produce a generation with better talented skills. Furthermore, Countries have stable political regime and strong economical living standards are much better than unstable and poor countries in creating better generations which will make differences in the future. To illustrate country such Japan has a long-time stable economy and build a strong education system has much performed effects on people’s lives. These two factors are mostly responsible of exist of many talented young and matured individual who have made a lot of discoveries and developments that returned with huge benefits back to their state.
Therefore, I think lucky people who inherited some unique characteristics from their ancestors and born in stable and rich nation have eventually more opportunities and better prosperous future to become more successful individuals.
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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
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People are born with different characteristics to grow up with some certain mentality and personality. However, there are other circumstances and conditions of living that may have a huge impact on how people grow up and develop.
Certainly, individuals are born with many body and mind differences of each other. This could be scientifically known in biology as genetics that may inherited by individuals from their ancestors. For example, most well-known musician, such as Beethoven and Mozart, are born in musician families. Therefore, I think that talented people usually inherit their characteristics from their previous generation who belong to.
However, if some capabilities and resources are made available for some people, they would have a huge impact on them. To illustrate a good education system that could influence student and does include some creative classes such as music and sport may likely produce a generation with better talented skills. Furthermore, Countries have stable political regime and strong economical living standards are much better than unstable and poor countries in creating better generations which will make differences in the future. To illustrate country such Japan has a long-time stable economy and build a strong education system has much performed effects on people’s lives. These two factors are mostly responsible of exist of many talented young and matured individual who have made a lot of discoveries and developments that returned with huge benefits back to their state.
Therefore, I think lucky people who inherited some unique characteristics from their ancestors and born in stable and rich nation have eventually more opportunities and better prosperous future to become more successful individuals.
