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[kiaconchim]

The line graph above represents the changes of the percentage of Internet usage by the population in the USA, Canada, and Mexico from 1999 to 2009.

It can be seen that the proportion of people who used Internet increased sharply in all countries throughout the period. Overall the SA and Canada experienced the fastest growth in Internet usage, compared to Mexico.

In 1999,the USA started at the first place when about more than 20% of its population had Internet access, followed by Canada and Mexico at 10% and 5% respectively. By 2003, however,the figure for Canada for the first time in the past 4 years, overcame that of the USA by a two-fold increase in the percentage. Mexico also saw a rise in that regard, but less significant, when the figure was about only 30%.

By 2009, the percentage of Internet users was the highest in Canada. Almost 100% of Canadian population used Internet, whereas it was about 80% in the USA, and 40% in Mexico.


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[Flick]

The line graph above represents the changes of the percentage of Internet usage by the population in the USA, Canada, and Mexico from 1999 to 2009.

It can be seen that the proportion of people who used the Internet increased sharply in all countries throughout the period. Overall, the USA and Canada experienced the fastest growth in Internet usage compared to Mexico.

In 1999,the USA started at the first place when about more than 20% of its population had Internet access, followed by Canada and Mexico at 10% and 5% respectively.(<--Reword to: "In 1999, about 20% of the population in the USA had Internet access, followed by 10% in Canada and 5% in Mexico.") By 2003, however, the figure for Canada for the first time in the past 4 years, overcame that of the USA by a two-fold increase in the percentage.(<--Reword to: "However, by 2003, the number of Internet users in Canada had increased to more than 50%, overtaking the USA.") Mexico also saw a rise in that regard, but less significant, with about 30% of the population using the Internet.

By 2009, the percentage of Internet users was the highest in Canada. Almost 100% of the Canadian population used the Internet, whereas it was about 80% in the USA, and 40% in Mexico.

[kiaconchim]

The line graph above represents the changes of the percentage of Internet usage by the population in the USA, Canada, and Mexico from 1999 to 2009.

It can be seen that the proportion of people who used the Internet increased sharply in all countries throughout the period. Overall, the USA and Canada experienced the fastest growth in Internet usage compared to Mexico.

In 1999,the USA started at the first place when about more than 20% of its population had Internet access, followed by Canada and Mexico at 10% and 5% respectively.(<--Reword to: "In 1999, about 20% of the population in the USA had Internet access, followed by 10% in Canada and 5% in Mexico.") By 2003, however, the figure for Canada for the first time in the past 4 years, overcame that of the USA by a two-fold increase in the percentage.(<--Reword to: "However, by 2003, the number of Internet users in Canada had increased to more than 50%, overtaking the USA.") Mexico also saw a rise in that regard, but less significant, with about 30% of the population using the Internet.

By 2009, the percentage of Internet users was the highest in Canada. Almost 100% of the Canadian population used the Internet, whereas it was about 80% in the USA, and 40% in Mexico.

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[alainfarhi123]

Nice Post