Smoking causes many disease, so should be made illegal.... to what extent you do agree.
(could you support me by checking and giving opinion)
Ans:
it is absolutely true that Smoking is harmful and can cause many diseases. However, i do not agree with the opinion that should be declared prohibited by the country.The reasons in favour of my argaument are as follows,
First of all,our body are badly affected by active or passive smoking and even severe condition can be leaded by smoking like stroke, Diabetes Mallitus even cancer.Based on health issue if smoking is banned , it may lead to other problem.Those who cant controll their addiction will try to adopt alternate way to get access to cigarette. it will lead to search them illegal market like our prohibited drugs sucha coaine and murijuana.As result drugs dealer will be benefited and black market will flourish.
Secondly,what is the duty of a good government.? it is not the role of government to check individual wish. it is violation of freedom of a person. Government will campaign against the harmful effect of smoking and educate all specially student regarding the hazards of it and then individual take discesion what he want to do.
in conclusion, the decision to ban smoking, though have some advantages,would be more likely to have overall negetive effect in society and it would be better for government to continue campaign against the adverse effect of that bad habit
smoking causes many diseases, so should be made illiga
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Re: smoking causes many diseases, so should be made illig
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Second ideas is not developed sufficiently. Overall progression is difficult to follow
Cohesion and coherency: linker words are missing. Although proper paragraphing and transition words are used but other connective device are not used effectively.
Lexical resource: Word choice is not good and adequate range of vocabulary is used
Grammar: There are so many errors in grammar. Most of the sentences contain errors. Capital letters are not used when starting new sentences in most of the cases.
Score Range:
5.5 to 6