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Could you please correct my essay and provide feedback

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20. Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university.
- Why do so many people want to study in English?
- Why is English such an important English language
- Give reasons for your answers.


Response:

Most educational institutions in the English origin countries are widely agreed as tier 1 institutions, and they extensively use English language for learning purposes. For this reason, many students prefer to study in English to be able to pursue their education in one among the most recognized colleges and universities. It is argued that English is considered as an important international language today. This will be proven by analyzing both how it act as a communication bridge as well as a standard medium for learning.

Firstly, English is the most commonly spoken language in many parts of the world. As known to everyone there are many countries that have a national language other than English, so it becomes very difficult for them to share their ideas without a common language for communication. As a result of this, English is being in practice as a bridging language among these differently speaking countries. Therefore, with no shadow of doubt it is considered that English is most recognized international language.

Similarly, many universities in the world use English as the preferred mode for teaching. For instance, even in a country like India that speaks more than 20 different languages, most universities in this country primarily use English for educating students. This is because; all the resources and learning materials are majorly made available in English. Thus, it is apparent when looking at this scenario that English has emerged to be a crucial international language.

To conclude, for reasons related to acting as a widely spoken language and most standardized mode for coaching students, it has been proven that English is the most important international language.
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