Please grade my writing task 1 general writing sample
Posted: Sat Aug 23, 2014 10:13 am
1. Write a letter to the council about the road problem in front of your house. Explain them the problem and ask them to take action.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter to keep you informed about the road problem in front of my house.Since the road is deeply curved, it is resulting in too many accidents.
Our home is located in the village araku near the city vishakhapatnam.Araku is one of the best tourist attractions in our state.So there are n number of people visiting this place very often.
Due to this danger prone area , every now and then there is an accident taking place.In adddition to this fact , there is a primary school located near the curve.So this is a threat to the lives of young india.
Several other reasons for the accidents are rash driving,no proper signals will be given while turning the vehicles.
Due to the fact that tourists come here with a lot of excitement to enjoy the attractions, some times they go out of control with rash driving.Some others also forget to give signals while turning the vehicle across the curve.
Keeping these facts in mind, i honourably request you to take immediate action in resolving this problem.I think it would be good if we can arrange speed breakers at the start and ending of the curve.It would also be a great help if we can put a note on the road that it is followed by a deep curve.
Kindly take some action regarding this problem as soon as possible
Thanking you,
yours faithfully
raghavi
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter to keep you informed about the road problem in front of my house.Since the road is deeply curved, it is resulting in too many accidents.
Our home is located in the village araku near the city vishakhapatnam.Araku is one of the best tourist attractions in our state.So there are n number of people visiting this place very often.
Due to this danger prone area , every now and then there is an accident taking place.In adddition to this fact , there is a primary school located near the curve.So this is a threat to the lives of young india.
Several other reasons for the accidents are rash driving,no proper signals will be given while turning the vehicles.
Due to the fact that tourists come here with a lot of excitement to enjoy the attractions, some times they go out of control with rash driving.Some others also forget to give signals while turning the vehicle across the curve.
Keeping these facts in mind, i honourably request you to take immediate action in resolving this problem.I think it would be good if we can arrange speed breakers at the start and ending of the curve.It would also be a great help if we can put a note on the road that it is followed by a deep curve.
Kindly take some action regarding this problem as soon as possible
Thanking you,
yours faithfully
raghavi