not sure if this could save my 6.5 band in writing
Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2014 1:41 pm
I am not sure if this could save my 6.5 band in writing ( another .5 from task 1 General can add up to make it to the band 7 goal . ) Please help to check.
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You received a letter from your bank stating that you will be charged $35 for a banking service you didn't use.You know that this information is incorrect.
- Write what the erroneous banking service is
- explain why this is in error
- Describe what you would like the bank to do about it .
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Dear Sir ,
I am writing you in response to a letter that I received from your bank yesterday . As I understand , it stated there that there was a $35 that was charged on my account after completing a wire transfer. I would like to express my dissatisfaction about this as I am not aware of such transaction and paying a certain amount for a service that I did not even made makes me more worried.
It has been almost a week now that I have not accessed my account. Also, it is very unlikely for me to execute a wire transfer as I have not did it before. You can probably request to retrieve the details of my transaction history and I am confident that you will not find any money transfer that has been executed since the first day I opened up my savings account with your bank. Moreover, all of my bill payments and money transactions are set up in a way that it will be automatically be deducted from my savings fund at the end of the month .
I would like to point out that this kind of banking system failure can create unpleasant business relationship between us and even to your numerous clients. I suggest that you start your own internal investigation to address this system failure and immediately implement a corrective action.
As soon as you find out where is the disconnect , I demand a full proof that this will not happen again. Please immediately pull back the $30 charges you imposed to my account as well.
Yours Faithfully,
Mr.Gainer
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You received a letter from your bank stating that you will be charged $35 for a banking service you didn't use.You know that this information is incorrect.
- Write what the erroneous banking service is
- explain why this is in error
- Describe what you would like the bank to do about it .
__________________________________________________________________
Dear Sir ,
I am writing you in response to a letter that I received from your bank yesterday . As I understand , it stated there that there was a $35 that was charged on my account after completing a wire transfer. I would like to express my dissatisfaction about this as I am not aware of such transaction and paying a certain amount for a service that I did not even made makes me more worried.
It has been almost a week now that I have not accessed my account. Also, it is very unlikely for me to execute a wire transfer as I have not did it before. You can probably request to retrieve the details of my transaction history and I am confident that you will not find any money transfer that has been executed since the first day I opened up my savings account with your bank. Moreover, all of my bill payments and money transactions are set up in a way that it will be automatically be deducted from my savings fund at the end of the month .
I would like to point out that this kind of banking system failure can create unpleasant business relationship between us and even to your numerous clients. I suggest that you start your own internal investigation to address this system failure and immediately implement a corrective action.
As soon as you find out where is the disconnect , I demand a full proof that this will not happen again. Please immediately pull back the $30 charges you imposed to my account as well.
Yours Faithfully,
Mr.Gainer