need reviews and toughts about my essay (letter +essay)
Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2013 6:04 pm
Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is true that famous sports people earn alot. Their high earnings are fair or not is very much debatable. In the following paragraphs, we will see the both sides of this before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
On the one hand, people think that such a high pay is resulting in social imbalance, widening the gap between rich and poor. Firstly, the money they earn is tax payer's money. It should be used for better purpose like giving food and shelter to poor and needy. Secondly, these people are representing the country, which is giving them name and fame. Hence they should be grateful to that instead of taking money for representing their home land.
On the other hand, it is believed that they are getting this money as a gratitude for their hardwork and efforts. They had to go through rigorous training and daily practice to reach that level, so its a kind of compensation to their dedication and will power. Also they are the reason behind our entrainment in sports, we watch them play and they win the games for our country and make us proud. So its justifiable that, they are paid very high. By paying high, it can also encourage other people or next generation to make their career in sports. Because of this, country will be benifited by rich talent pool.
To sum up, I feel that it is very much correct to pay such high salaries to sport people. However, if they can use part of their earnings for the upliftment of society, it will be good.
Letter to come in next post!
It is true that famous sports people earn alot. Their high earnings are fair or not is very much debatable. In the following paragraphs, we will see the both sides of this before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
On the one hand, people think that such a high pay is resulting in social imbalance, widening the gap between rich and poor. Firstly, the money they earn is tax payer's money. It should be used for better purpose like giving food and shelter to poor and needy. Secondly, these people are representing the country, which is giving them name and fame. Hence they should be grateful to that instead of taking money for representing their home land.
On the other hand, it is believed that they are getting this money as a gratitude for their hardwork and efforts. They had to go through rigorous training and daily practice to reach that level, so its a kind of compensation to their dedication and will power. Also they are the reason behind our entrainment in sports, we watch them play and they win the games for our country and make us proud. So its justifiable that, they are paid very high. By paying high, it can also encourage other people or next generation to make their career in sports. Because of this, country will be benifited by rich talent pool.
To sum up, I feel that it is very much correct to pay such high salaries to sport people. However, if they can use part of their earnings for the upliftment of society, it will be good.
Letter to come in next post!
