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If a person wants to avoid invading the privacy of his or her personal life by media and public, then he or she should never be a star or celebrity. Do you agree or disagree?
In this modern world, everyone has a dream that to be a star or celebrity and to spread his or her shine throughout the world. The glamourous world is the one of those places where a person can become a star and can be famous in the whole world. But, there are some disadvantages of this popularity because this thing puts the privacy of celebrities in the danger zone. Everyone wants to know about the personal life of them. It is said that anyone who wishes to avoid this should never become a celebrity. In my opinion that it’s better that if a person wants to avoid it than he or she should never become a celebrity.
First of all, if a person cannot handle the problem of invading the privacy by the media or public then he should not go to be a celebrity. For instance, a person who does not want others interference in his or her life and gets depressed very easily because of it.
Secondly, everyone has their own secrets, but there are some people who do not care if their secrets expose. On the flip side, there are some people who are so conscious about their personal issues and do not like exposure then they should not be a celebrity.
Thirdly, there are some people who had bad experiences in past lives which they do not want to disclose to others because it may be ruin their lives and families.
However, some people think that everything has its own merits and demerits. So, we should not worry about future matters and try to be a star or celebrity.
In the conclusion, I think that the public and media should need to understand about the importance of privacy of others and does not interfere in the personal life of anyone who is a celebrity or not.
Could anyone help me to give grade to this essay ?
Thanks.
If a person wants to avoid invading the privacy of his or her personal life by media and public, then he or she should never be a star or celebrity. Do you agree or disagree?
In this modern world, everyone has a dream that to be a star or celebrity and to spread his or her shine throughout the world. The glamourous world is the one of those places where a person can become a star and can be famous in the whole world. But, there are some disadvantages of this popularity because this thing puts the privacy of celebrities in the danger zone. Everyone wants to know about the personal life of them. It is said that anyone who wishes to avoid this should never become a celebrity. In my opinion that it’s better that if a person wants to avoid it than he or she should never become a celebrity.
First of all, if a person cannot handle the problem of invading the privacy by the media or public then he should not go to be a celebrity. For instance, a person who does not want others interference in his or her life and gets depressed very easily because of it.
Secondly, everyone has their own secrets, but there are some people who do not care if their secrets expose. On the flip side, there are some people who are so conscious about their personal issues and do not like exposure then they should not be a celebrity.
Thirdly, there are some people who had bad experiences in past lives which they do not want to disclose to others because it may be ruin their lives and families.
However, some people think that everything has its own merits and demerits. So, we should not worry about future matters and try to be a star or celebrity.
In the conclusion, I think that the public and media should need to understand about the importance of privacy of others and does not interfere in the personal life of anyone who is a celebrity or not.
