Can I get some help? AC1

[dashis]

The diagrams below show UK students' responses to the question of to what extent would they describe themselves as financially organised.


................ Very organised %
All students ............ 21

Age up to 22 years .... 18
Age 23-25 years........ 26
Age over 26 years..... 35


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The diagrams compare responses from about financial management from UK students with the age of those who have very well organised finances. As an overall trend it is clear that the vast majority of students claim to have fairly organised finances, while the majority of students with well organised budget are aged over 26 years.

55% of students say that their finances are fairly organised and 21% of students have a very well organised budget. This can be compared with 20% of students, who claim to have not very organised finances or 4%, who do not organise their finances at all.

Out of these 21% of students with well organised finances, 35% are aged over 26, 26% are between 23-25 years old and 18% are up
to 22 years old. The rest 21% are students of different age.

In conclusion, most of the UK students have fairly organised budget, while the tendency of managing finances very good seems to increase with age.

[Flick]

The diagrams below show UK students' responses to the question of to what extent would they describe themselves as financially organised.


................ Very organised %
All students ............ 21

Age up to 22 years .... 18
Age 23-25 years........ 26
Age over 26 years..... 35


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The diagrams compare responses about financial management from UK students with more information about the age of those who have very well organised finances. As an overall trend, it is clear that the vast majority of students claim to have fairly organised finances, while the majority of students with a well organised budget are aged over 26 years.

55% of students say that their finances are fairly organised and 21% of students have a very well organised budget. This can be compared with 20% of students, who claim to have not very organised finances, and 4%, who do not organise their finances at all.

Out of the 21% of students with well organised finances, 35% are aged over 26, 26% are between 23-25 years old and 18% are up to 22 years old. The rest 21% are students of different age. (<-- This sentence doesn't make sense.)

In conclusion, most of the students in the UK have fairly organised budgets, while the tendency of managing finances very well seems to increase with age.

You describe the information really well. It would be great if you could suggest a reason or two as to why financial organisation seems to improve with age.
Thanks,
Flick