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rairaichan0323 wrote:Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work.
How do you think children should spend their free time?

A proper method of managing free time is playing a key role in a student's success. Some people opine that pupils should do more school work during their leisure time. It is disagreed that schoolchildren should not simply spend excessive time on the school activity.(<-- This sentence is confusing. You use two negatives, 'disagreed' and 'not spend time'. This makes the meaning unclear. Do you mean 'I don't believe children should spend their free time on schoolwork'?) This argument will be proven by analyzing how children can benefit from spending their spare time on extra-curricular activities and volunteer work.

First of all, it is an undeniable fact (<-- Is this backed up by research? If not, this is only your opinion, so you should start the sentence with 'I believe' instead.) that students should spend their free time doing outside class activities in order to maintain a good health. For instance, a pupil joins the football club; it can motivate him to do regular exercise. This makes it clear that individuals who exercise regularly can enhance their body condition. This shows that spending leisure time in these activities has a positive impact on children.

Secondly and even more importantly, students should participate in social works in their free time so that they can contribute to the development of society. To take Hong Kong as an example, young people work as volunteers to help a social organization to sell flags on Saturdays. This helps them to cultivate empathy and give back to their community. It is obvious from this that conducting volunteer work can have a beneficial influence upon offspring.

Following this look at how adolescents can have a profoundly good impact by using their excess time on after school activities and social works, it has been proven that they should spend their spare time on others rather than on school work. Also, I believe that it seems highly advisable for parents to arrange different activities for their children.

rairaichan0323 wrote:
We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals and crime detection. What things they will be used for in the future. Is this dependence on computer a good thing or should we be more auspicious of their benefits?

In a contemporary society, a computer is playing an important role of humankind’s life. (<--Reword to: "In contemporary society, computers play an important role in our lives.") The use of computers is continuously growing in people's daily lives the same way driving a car has become essential. It is agreed that computers have brought numerous advantages to the world. This argument will be analyzed by looking at how this technology can help people to eliminate unnecessary mistakes and simplify work processing.

First of all, it is an undeniable fact that using a computer allows an individual to reduce the possibility of making an error. For instance, using a software program for writing an essay makes it easy to check for spelling and grammar mistakes. This makes it clear that computer users are able to avoid some faults with this amazing technology. As this shows, computers have had a positive impact on humankind.

Secondly and even more importantly, complicated data sourcing can be done simply by using a computer. To illustrate, hospitals are able to instantly access patients' records by computer. Thus, doctors can easily review information that can curtail their workload. It is obvious that the benefits of depending on the computer far outweigh its drawbacks.

By way of conclusion, following a look at how this fabulous technology can lessen human errors and streamline the processing of work, it has been proven that using the computer has brought countless advantages to all users. Also, I believe that this machine will continue to play a significant role in the world.

rairaichan0323 wrote:Some people think the advertisement on TV are useless while others think they are valuable. Discuss both views and giver your opinion.


In a modern city, adverts are an indispensable part of our lives. It is easy to receive new information through ads. While some would argue that advertisements are futile, many others would contend that they are priceless. These points of view will be discussed before arriving at a satisfactory outcome.

On the one hand, some people are of the opinion that commercials in media are pointless. They only pursue human to purchase something which is possibly wasteness. (<--Reword to: "They only convince consumers to buy useless products, which leads to waste.") For instance, Apple stores promote the new iPhone model every year. It can be argued that individual is unnecessary to alter other fashionable mobiles even the original phone is still functional. (<--Reword to: "It can be argued that it is unnecessary to upgrade to the new model while the previous model is still functional as this is wasteful and costly.") Thus, it is clear why some people gravitate towards this point of view.

On the other hand, many argue that advertising is precious asit allows companies to share information with consumers. To illustrate, the Hong Kong government frequently announces and promotes new policies on television in order to draw locals' attention. Therefore, the domestic residents are able to receive valuable information. After analyzing these facts, it is clear why many support this claim.

By way of conclusion, there are strong arguments on both sides. However, after analyzing these points of view, it is certainly true that advertisements are not pointless for the majority of citizens. Also, I believe that it seems highly advisable for the administration to give more informative messages to the public through advertising.

rairaichan0323 wrote:
In many countries, students must leave school because of their poor behaviours. Some people think it is a good idea, while others argue that there are other ways to solve this problem. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Discipline is very significant for everyone. In many nations, some disruptive pupils are expelled because of their misbehaviors. While some people argue that it is a splendid idea, many others contend that there are alternative measures to tackle this matter. These points of view will be discussed in this order before arriving at a satisfactory outcome.

On the one hand, some people are of the opinion that worse-behaved schoolchildren should be asked to leave the institution as they could influence others during the lesson. For instance, badly behaved students always create noise and force teacher to focus on crowd control rather than teaching. It can be argued that ill-disciplined pupils effectively rid the well-behaved majority of a proper education and they should be expelled from the school. Thus, it is clear why some people gravitate toward this point of view.

On the other hand, many argue that there are some suitable means to settle this difficulty instead of expelling. To illustrate, an academy can separate those mischievous and well-mannered children into different classes for educating. Thus, the disruptive pupils are unable to interrupt others, and the teachers are able to provide more appropriate lessons to them. After analyzing these facts, it is certainly clear why many support this claim.

By way of conclusion, there are strong arguments on both sides. However, after analyzing these points of view, it is clear that educational institutions should not expel any worse-behaved students. Also, I believe that it seems highly advisable for schools to establish more effective methods to amend students’ actions.

rairaichan0323 wrote:Write a letter to your manager regarding the recent conference you attended
• how the conference benefited you
• what you are going to present to your colleague
• why you thing it will benefit them



Dear Mr. Lee,

I am writing to you in regards to the conference which I recently attended.

This conference introduced state-of-art software programs which are used in order to protect companies from hackers. I learnt several useful techniques as well as a significant information during this conference.

After summarizing this information, I will arrange a meeting to introduce it to all company employees. During the meeting, I will teach and demonstrate some of the techniques on lowering the odds of being attacked by hackers. Furthermore, I will hold private lessons for each department to cover these points personally. Consequently, once they learn these skills and apply them properly, I believe their work will continue smoothly and safely. Also, all company information will be well protected.

If you have any suggestions for this arrangement, I would be most appreciative.

Yours sincerely,

Janis Lee

rairaichan0323 wrote:You have borrowed 10 library books and due to urgent mater, you will not be able to return them on time. Write a letter politely explaining your position and requesting that your fine be withheld.


Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Janis Lee. I am writing to you regards to my library books which are due this Friday.

Unfortunately, I will be unable to return them on time because my grandmother has fallen ill. As you can understand, she is in need of support from my family. Consequently, I have to return to my country tonight so will not have sufficient time to return them to you.

From my understanding, I will receive a fine due to the late return of those books. As you can comprehend, this is an incredibly special situation. Therefore, I am wondering if you can possibly waive this fine? I would be grateful if you consider this situation at your earliest convenience.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Janis Lee

rairaichan0323 wrote: You are on a holiday but you have realized that you are not able to return to work on time. Write a letter to your boss to explain why and ask for permission to return at a later time.


Dear Mr. Lee,

I am writing to ask for your approval for my late return to work due to my son’s illness.

I am now on my holiday excursion with my family in my hometown. (<--Reword to: "I am currently on leave with my family in my hometown.") However, the weather in here is abnormal as well as it has got cooler so suddenly. (<--Reword to: "However, the weather here has not been great. There was a sudden cold snap that has severely affected my son's health.") I took him to the hospital and the doctor said that he has to be hospitalized for a few days. Therefore, I am unable to return to work on time. I will be back as soon as my son has recovered.

I would be most appreciative if you could consider this request at your earliest convenience. (<--Reword to: "I would be most appreciative if you could extend my leave for the duration of my son's illness.") You can contact me on my mobile 61-1232133123 or email me. I look forward to hearing from you and sincerely apologize for the inconvenience this sudden and unforeseeable event may cause.

Yours sincerely,

Janis Lee

rairaichan0323 wrote:You recently had a meal in a restaurant and you enjoyed the food and service. Write a letter to a local newspaper to recommend the restaurant.


Dear Editor,

I am writing to recommend a French restaurant called ABC Restaurant, located on Oxford Street.

First of all, the prices in this restaurant are reasonable. As you can comprehend, normally the price of French restaurants is exorbitant. However, ABC Restaurant was very affordable. Secondly, the quality of food there is splendid. Their fusion food is very unique and it is incredibly tasty. I believe that you will not find such amazing food in other restaurants. Finally, the service at this restaurant is excellent. The waiters are very professional, polite and patient. They know very well about their restaurant. (<--Reword to: "Their knowledge of the food and drink was exceptional.") They are able to offer a lot of nice recommendations according to your preferences.

It is my pleasure to introduce the ABC Restaurant to you. From my point of view, it is the best French restaurant in our city. Thanks for reading.

Yours faithfully,

Janis Lee

rairaichan0323 wrote:You are travelling and have lost something that is expensive. The lost item is insured. Write to the insurance company to describe how it happened and ask for compensation.


Dear Sir / Madam,

My name is Janis Lee and I am the holder of insurance policy AB12345. I am writing to lodge an insurance claim under the said policy for the loss of my laptop, which I bought two months ago for HKD 7000.

On 24th March, I was on vacation in New Zealand. In the evening, I went back to my hotel room and found my laptop, a Fujitsu FJ123, had been stolen. The door and windows were locked. I complained to the hotel manager and called the police. According to their inspection, someone entered my room through the window. Enclosed with this letter is a copy of the statement from the police and the original receipt for the laptop. In addition, I would like to receive this compensation as soon as possible so I can buy a replacement as soon as possible. I look forward to your prompt reply.

Yours faithfully,

Janis Lee

rairaichan0323 wrote:You are attending an intensive language training class. You have difficulty following one of the courses. Write to the course tutor to describe your difficulty and ask for advice.


Dear Mr. Chen,

I am writing to ask for your assistance. Would you please give me advice regarding the English speaking course? I have found a difficulty of my speaking skills.(<--Reword to: "I have been struggling with this course.")

I have attended to the intensive English class for three weeks. I have enjoyed it so much. However, I have found that my speaking skills are not improving at all. Although I practice during class, I don't think I am making any progress.

You have much experience in teaching English. Could you please give me some instructions on how I can improve my techniques? Are there any books which are good for improving speaking skills? Could you advise me of a suitable title? I could get it from the bookshop.

I would be grateful for any information you could give me in this regard. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Janis Lee

rairaichan0323 wrote:More and more people choose to live by themselves in the recent years. Why is the case and it is a positive or negative development of society.


In a contemporary society, people are increasingly choosingto live alone. However, there is some disagreement as to whether the overall effect of solo living has been positive or negative. While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, it is agreed that the drawbacks of the living alone far outweigh its benefits.

Firstly, it is an undeniable fact that the solo living will create large demand for housing. In some areas there are inadequate levels of accommodation in order to fulfill their enormous requirements. For instance, the Hong Kong government always struggles to find real estate for building houses. This makes it clear that this living style has created a great burden to the administration. As this shows, this lifestyle has had a negative impact on the community.

Secondly and even more importantly, a huge financial burden is placed on the authorities in helping lonely senior inhabitants. Elderly people are in need of support from the local council as they cannot receive any assistance from their offspring. To illustrate, every year the Hong Kong government is spending several billion dollars supporting older people who live by themselves. Thus, it causes a huge financial load on the government. It is obvious from this that such a mode of living has disadvantages for the local district.

By way of conclusion, following a look at how the individual living alone can increase a housing shortage and financial burden for the authorities, it has been proven that the trend of people living alone has generally been a negative development. Also, it seems highly advisable for the community to encourage citizens to live with their parents.