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Please evalute my essay by some experts because i am going to write ielts on 10th of May,.
Even though globalization affects the world economics in a positive way,its negative side should not be forgotten.Discuss.
Do you agree or disagree.
In present age,globalization refers to widening,deepening and spreading up of global interconnection,It is commonly seen that spectacular increase in international trade and foreign direct investment in recent years.It is agreed that positive impact will outweigh negative factors.These argument will be proven by looking at how globalization playing a pivot role in the global business organization as well as how to help developing countries.
Firstly,the Multi- National Companies do business across the world,For example companies like MacDonalds can be seen on high streets in most cities,it goes without saying that how goods are produced in one country and sold in many others.However it encourages investment in less developed countires to reduce poverty in the developing world.
Secondly,many countries engages in the global production sharing,for instance global production of Apple iPod.iPod designed in the United States and assembled at China.Thus,it can be seen that many industrialised countries may offer opportunities for economical growth as well as employment .It has been proven that how this money helps to improve the standard of living in developing countries.
To sum up,I would concede that globalization does come with some adverse effect,Despite that fact,benefit created by it outweigh the disadvantages.After analysing this subject,it is predicted that we should promote globalisation and meanwhile the local government should take measure steps towards assimiliation.
Even though globalization affects the world economics in a positive way,its negative side should not be forgotten.Discuss.
Do you agree or disagree.
In present age,globalization refers to widening,deepening and spreading up of global interconnection,It is commonly seen that spectacular increase in international trade and foreign direct investment in recent years.It is agreed that positive impact will outweigh negative factors.These argument will be proven by looking at how globalization playing a pivot role in the global business organization as well as how to help developing countries.
Firstly,the Multi- National Companies do business across the world,For example companies like MacDonalds can be seen on high streets in most cities,it goes without saying that how goods are produced in one country and sold in many others.However it encourages investment in less developed countires to reduce poverty in the developing world.
Secondly,many countries engages in the global production sharing,for instance global production of Apple iPod.iPod designed in the United States and assembled at China.Thus,it can be seen that many industrialised countries may offer opportunities for economical growth as well as employment .It has been proven that how this money helps to improve the standard of living in developing countries.
To sum up,I would concede that globalization does come with some adverse effect,Despite that fact,benefit created by it outweigh the disadvantages.After analysing this subject,it is predicted that we should promote globalisation and meanwhile the local government should take measure steps towards assimiliation.
