I see that you have posted 2 topics. I appreciate the enthusiasm, but it's probably better to wait for an evaluation and then do a second set a few days or a week later.
Fluency - Speech is a little slow and there are quite a lot of pauses and some repetition. This is clearly your weakest point and needs a LOT of work.
Coherence - Good use of a variety of connectives.
Vocabulary - Good enough to answer the questions with some details.
Grammar - Quite good basic grammar with some good complex structures.