Please assess my speaking: Describe an advertisement you saw or read

[Kandy]

Dear all,
Please review and assess my speaking part 2 about an advertisement.
My ielts test date will be 29th July.
Thank you so much and best regards,
Kandy

[David.IELTS.Examiner]

Hello!

Fluency - Some unnatural pauses. Speech is a little slow.

Coherence - Good range of connectives used correctly.

Vocabulary - Quite limited. Very general with few details and reasons.

Grammar - Good grammar in terms of accuracy, but the range of complex structures is limited.

Pronunciation - Not very clear, though this may be the recording. I find the vowel sounds inaccurate.

All the best,
David

[Kandy]

Dear David,
Thank you so much.
I will try to fix them next time.
Thanks & Regards,
Kandy