My first task 2 Essay. Need your feedback
Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2014 11:07 am
Below is my first task 2 essay. I have tried to keep the essay structure as suggested by you Ryan. Would love to hear from you and others what you think on this.
An increasing number of people changed their career and place of residence several times in their life. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Over the years, there has been a significant increase in the number of people who are no longer resorting to just one career path or place of residence, as had been the case in earlier times. While there may be some downsides to it, overall it may be considered as a positive development. This will be analyzed by taking into account the benefits for an individual and the society at large.
Many renowned celebrities did odd jobs before they found their true calling in life. For instance, Bollywood superstar Amitabh Bachhan was a radio jockey before he took to acting and became a world famous actor. This makes it clear that there is no reason for an individual to stick to just one career path to be successful. It is obvious from the example above that change of professions cannot be considered as a negative development for an individual.
Moreover, frequent exchange of people from different cultures & religion helps the society to be more tolerant and sensitive to each other’s personal beliefs and cultures. For example, today the Indian festival of Diwali is celebrated in even in the white house, the residence of the president of USA. As this shows, the impact of people from different cultures and beliefs, benefits the society, and should be considered a positive development.
In conclusion, it is for overall benefit of the individual and the society that people don’t restrict themselves to a place of residence or a career path. It has been proven by analyzing the facts above that this is overall a positive development and it is predicted that this trend is likely to continue and may rise in the near future.
An increasing number of people changed their career and place of residence several times in their life. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Over the years, there has been a significant increase in the number of people who are no longer resorting to just one career path or place of residence, as had been the case in earlier times. While there may be some downsides to it, overall it may be considered as a positive development. This will be analyzed by taking into account the benefits for an individual and the society at large.
Many renowned celebrities did odd jobs before they found their true calling in life. For instance, Bollywood superstar Amitabh Bachhan was a radio jockey before he took to acting and became a world famous actor. This makes it clear that there is no reason for an individual to stick to just one career path to be successful. It is obvious from the example above that change of professions cannot be considered as a negative development for an individual.
Moreover, frequent exchange of people from different cultures & religion helps the society to be more tolerant and sensitive to each other’s personal beliefs and cultures. For example, today the Indian festival of Diwali is celebrated in even in the white house, the residence of the president of USA. As this shows, the impact of people from different cultures and beliefs, benefits the society, and should be considered a positive development.
In conclusion, it is for overall benefit of the individual and the society that people don’t restrict themselves to a place of residence or a career path. It has been proven by analyzing the facts above that this is overall a positive development and it is predicted that this trend is likely to continue and may rise in the near future.