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Describe a country you would like to visit

You should say

what the country is

when you would go there

what you would do there

And explain why you would like to visit it

Hello!

Fluency - Good speed, some pauses, but usually at appropriate places
Coherence - Good range of connectives used well
Vocabulary - Good, with some less common items
Grammar - Good, but try to use a wider range and be careful about making basic errors.
Pronunciation - Clear with some good intonation and a little stress

Basically, grammar is your weak point, with the other aspects of your English at a good standard

All the best,
David