Could you please, assess my essay?
Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2017 11:16 am
Маny people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Most of the communications today are made via different technology means. Some people believe that this and the everyday development of the technologies are having a negative impact on the society’s communication. I partly agree with that, but not entirely, because the technology in its entirety is not harmful for the communication at all.
On the one hand, there are many advantages that the modern communication technology provides. For instance, when somebody moves to another country he is still able to communicate with his family thanks to the advance of the technology. Moreover, when there is going to be a big meeting or seminar, but everyone is able to get there, they can present through internet and even have the opportunity to ask their questions. The technologies make the communication in some occasions a much easier, some times possible.
On the other hand, there are disadvantages of the society’s habit to use the technologies for communication. The people get used to use different programs or devices to communicate , therefore they are beginning to lose their abilities to talk in person. For example, it is much more convenient to scold someone via written report, mail or Skype, than in person. It is the same when it comes to our personal relationships, the words come easier, nevertheless if they are positive or negative, when we are in our comfort zone at home and writing to somebody through facebook, Skype or etc.
All in all, the modern technologies have both negative and positive impact on the society’s communication. Unfortunately, with every passing day the negatives are more and more prevailing than the positives. I hope that the society will start using less technology in their everyday communication with family and friends.
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Most of the communications today are made via different technology means. Some people believe that this and the everyday development of the technologies are having a negative impact on the society’s communication. I partly agree with that, but not entirely, because the technology in its entirety is not harmful for the communication at all.
On the one hand, there are many advantages that the modern communication technology provides. For instance, when somebody moves to another country he is still able to communicate with his family thanks to the advance of the technology. Moreover, when there is going to be a big meeting or seminar, but everyone is able to get there, they can present through internet and even have the opportunity to ask their questions. The technologies make the communication in some occasions a much easier, some times possible.
On the other hand, there are disadvantages of the society’s habit to use the technologies for communication. The people get used to use different programs or devices to communicate , therefore they are beginning to lose their abilities to talk in person. For example, it is much more convenient to scold someone via written report, mail or Skype, than in person. It is the same when it comes to our personal relationships, the words come easier, nevertheless if they are positive or negative, when we are in our comfort zone at home and writing to somebody through facebook, Skype or etc.
All in all, the modern technologies have both negative and positive impact on the society’s communication. Unfortunately, with every passing day the negatives are more and more prevailing than the positives. I hope that the society will start using less technology in their everyday communication with family and friends.
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