Writing Task 01: Please evaluate my writing posted below
Posted: Wed Feb 08, 2017 10:06 am
Hi,
Please find my evaluate below posted writing, I request you to please evaluate my writing on band score (IELTS Bands)
Thank you for your help in advance.
Rucha.
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Writing Task 01
(Question in the attachment)
Answer
The graph illustrates no. of males and females that have taken up further education in Britian. A consistent growth is observed in the no. of females taking up part-time education as an option.
Almost 30 percent increase observed in 1990/91 compared to preceding years, a considerable growth observed in full-time education choice. Whereas in-case of males choice of studying part-time has been deceased in year 1990/91, about 15 percent decrease was observed. More over males are inclined towards full-time education with steady growth from 1970/71.
Because of awareness and understanding need of education approximately 25 percent more women are taking up for part-time compared to males in 1990/91, whereas totally contradicting scenario was observed in year 1970/71. The ratio if males and females choosing full-time education in 1990/91 is almost same. Whereas in 1980/81 no major difference was observed in people taking education in Britian, whether part-time or full-time course.
We can conclude, women are more inclined towards educating themselves than males.
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#posted by Rucha on 08.02.2017 @ 03:40pm
Please find my evaluate below posted writing, I request you to please evaluate my writing on band score (IELTS Bands)
Thank you for your help in advance.
Rucha.
____________________________________________________________________________________________-
Writing Task 01
(Question in the attachment)
Answer
The graph illustrates no. of males and females that have taken up further education in Britian. A consistent growth is observed in the no. of females taking up part-time education as an option.
Almost 30 percent increase observed in 1990/91 compared to preceding years, a considerable growth observed in full-time education choice. Whereas in-case of males choice of studying part-time has been deceased in year 1990/91, about 15 percent decrease was observed. More over males are inclined towards full-time education with steady growth from 1970/71.
Because of awareness and understanding need of education approximately 25 percent more women are taking up for part-time compared to males in 1990/91, whereas totally contradicting scenario was observed in year 1970/71. The ratio if males and females choosing full-time education in 1990/91 is almost same. Whereas in 1980/81 no major difference was observed in people taking education in Britian, whether part-time or full-time course.
We can conclude, women are more inclined towards educating themselves than males.
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#posted by Rucha on 08.02.2017 @ 03:40pm