Please assess my writing task 1.
Posted: Fri Oct 21, 2016 7:15 pm
The charts below give information about travel to and from UK,and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the travel pattern of visitors to and from UK ,over the span of twenty years, ranging from 1979-1999. Apart from that, there is a bar chart as well, showing the most frequently visited places of the world by UK residents in the year 1999.
It can be seen clearly that from 1979 to 1986,the visitors, both to and from UK were less than 20 million. However, the trend depicts some changes after that. The numbers of visitors from UK to abroad increased drastically,reaching above 50 millions by 1999.In comparison, not more than 30 million came to UK by the same year, contributing little to the UK industry of tourism.
Furthermore, during the year 1999, France and Spain remained the most favourite destinations of UK residents with around 10 millions visiting those countries.On the other hand,people didn't find USA, Greece and Turkey very much attractive and the number of visitors to these countries are as little as 4 million.
The given line graph illustrates the travel pattern of visitors to and from UK ,over the span of twenty years, ranging from 1979-1999. Apart from that, there is a bar chart as well, showing the most frequently visited places of the world by UK residents in the year 1999.
It can be seen clearly that from 1979 to 1986,the visitors, both to and from UK were less than 20 million. However, the trend depicts some changes after that. The numbers of visitors from UK to abroad increased drastically,reaching above 50 millions by 1999.In comparison, not more than 30 million came to UK by the same year, contributing little to the UK industry of tourism.
Furthermore, during the year 1999, France and Spain remained the most favourite destinations of UK residents with around 10 millions visiting those countries.On the other hand,people didn't find USA, Greece and Turkey very much attractive and the number of visitors to these countries are as little as 4 million.