Please correct my speaking to Ban 9
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Please correct my speaking to Ban 9
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Re: Please correct my speaking to Ban 9
Hello brother,
Overall this is a great speaking test. There are a few improvements you could make to improve your English speaking fluency.
FEEDBACK
- lots of improvements not loads
- very good about consumption of fuel
- you've repeated the bicycle usage for their daily needs. bicycle usage could be made more simple as 'using a bicycle or bike'
- I use 'the' bicycle.
- Very good word congested to use to describe the heavy traffic in your city.
- Very good description of the vast range of bicycle manufacturing to support your argument.
- bicycle require should be the bicycle requires
- it requires very less space - should be it requires very little space
- POSITIVE: good conclusion and comparison to a car in terms of space saving.
- Mother Theresa - done a lot of joy should be has given a lot of joy to people'
- Good amount of information on Mother Theresa however it sounded as if you read it from a paper. Try to remember these facts more fluidly if you want to speak on them.
- TIP: Try to use google translate on English words that you don't know.
- Good answer to the question.
- I infer that is a good way of stating what you think and beginning your thoughts.
- POSITIVE Overall very good speaking test. You are quite intelligent and it comes through in your answers. Where you need to improve is practicing your speaking with a teacher. If you are looking for a band 9.0 then it is achievable for you.
If you would like to book some skype lessons then add us on skype contact@passmyielts.com or visit our website to try some free tests http://www.passmyielts.com.
Are there any other parts of the IELTS test you need help with?
Good luck brother.
Overall this is a great speaking test. There are a few improvements you could make to improve your English speaking fluency.
FEEDBACK
- lots of improvements not loads
- very good about consumption of fuel
- you've repeated the bicycle usage for their daily needs. bicycle usage could be made more simple as 'using a bicycle or bike'
- I use 'the' bicycle.
- Very good word congested to use to describe the heavy traffic in your city.
- Very good description of the vast range of bicycle manufacturing to support your argument.
- bicycle require should be the bicycle requires
- it requires very less space - should be it requires very little space
- POSITIVE: good conclusion and comparison to a car in terms of space saving.
- Mother Theresa - done a lot of joy should be has given a lot of joy to people'
- Good amount of information on Mother Theresa however it sounded as if you read it from a paper. Try to remember these facts more fluidly if you want to speak on them.
- TIP: Try to use google translate on English words that you don't know.
- Good answer to the question.
- I infer that is a good way of stating what you think and beginning your thoughts.
- POSITIVE Overall very good speaking test. You are quite intelligent and it comes through in your answers. Where you need to improve is practicing your speaking with a teacher. If you are looking for a band 9.0 then it is achievable for you.
If you would like to book some skype lessons then add us on skype contact@passmyielts.com or visit our website to try some free tests http://www.passmyielts.com.
Are there any other parts of the IELTS test you need help with?
Good luck brother.
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