My First Recording
Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2016 8:15 am
Please give me feedback, thank you a lot for your help 
Hello Mirghani!
Fluency - Speech is a little slow and there are some pauses, but still good overall.
Coherence - Good range of connectives. Good sentence order.
Vocabulary - Good, with some interesting details. This is your best feature.
Grammar - Quite good basic grammar. A few complex structures, but you should include more.
Pronunciation - Clear with some intonation. However, more intonation is needed. Put some life and feeling into your answer!
Overall, certainly not bad, but I suspect you could easily do better.
All the best,
David