Motorised flight was the greatest invention in 20th century. Pls assess coz i'm aiming at band 8

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Motorised flight was the greatest invention in 20th century. Pls assess coz i'm aiming at band 8

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Some people think motorised flight was the greatest invention in the 20th century and it has the biggest impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Please assess!

Motorised flight has been used extensively in today’s society. But the notion of its invention was the best in twentieth century is yet to be confirmed. This paper will articulate why flight was a ground-breaking invention yet there were other creations that also impacting people's lives.

Admittedly, motorised flight was a revolutionary invention that brought array of advantages to people’s lives. These include stimulating the international trade among businessmen and politicians by flying human around the world. People are able to reach and meet their counterparts and partners face-to-face, discuss important business deals while obtain mutual agreements and understandings. Despite of this, this transport also has been supporting travel industry around the globe and that any travelers can now enjoy their vacations overseas. Travelling abroad is no longer a dream to us and more importantly, most countries are benefit from the motorised flight, in which the national incomes are increasing and the countries’ economies are developing.

However, there were inventions that better supported our lives. Such inventions as the computers, the Internet and mobile phones are significantly impacting people’s daily livings than motorised flights. These technologies allow people communicate freely without having to travel abroad. Any man can reach their partners and even enjoy online shopping globally with simply the use of smart phones, computers and the Internet. Most importantly, international trade can also be facilitated when businessmen could video-conferences while travelers can book the flight tickets at any time via the cutting-edge technologies. Undoubtedly, these inventions have been impacting everyone’s lives significantly.
In sum, motorised flight was an impactful transportation but there are other inventions that bring bigger impact on everyone’s lives.
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plin0627 wrote:Some people think motorised flight was the greatest invention in the 20th century and it has the biggest impact on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Please assess!

Motorised flight is used extensively in today’s society. But the notion that its invention was the best in twentieth century is yet to be confirmed. This paper will articulate why flight was a ground-breaking invention yet there were other creations that also impact people's lives.

Admittedly, motorised flight was a revolutionary invention that brought an array of advantages to people’s lives. These include stimulating international trade among businessmen and politicians by flying humans around the world. People are able to reach and meet their counterparts and partners face-to-face, discuss important business deals and reach mutual agreements and understandings. In addition to this, this method of transport also supports the travel industry around the globe so that many travelers can now enjoy their vacations overseas. Travelling abroad is no longer a dream to us and more importantly, most countries benefit from motorised flight, in which national incomes are increasing and the countries’ economies are developing.

However, there are inventions that better support our lives. Such inventions include computers, the Internet and mobile phones, which significantly impact people’s daily lives more than motorised flights. These technologies allow people to communicate freely without having to travel abroad. Any man can reach their partner and even enjoy online shopping globally simply with the use of smart phones, computers and the Internet. Most importantly, international trade can also be facilitated thrugh video-conferences, while travelers can book flight tickets at any time via the cutting-edge technologies. Undoubtedly, these inventions have been impacting everyone’s lives significantly.

In summary, motorised flight was an impactful invention but there are other inventions that have had a bigger impact on everyone’s lives.
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