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I listened your recording.
You need to improve your pronunciation
Use adverbs and adjectives
Grammar-Need bit improvement

Thanks for sharing your thoughts about taking photos!
Here are a few notes:

--I’m not good at taking photos, but I like taking it. – taking THEM (photos)
--I read at that time it has – I read (past tense) at ONE TIME THAT IT HAS
--It has better quality in camera – It has A BETTER-QUALITY camera.
--Photographer – emphasize second “o” when you say it – pho – TO (short o, as in “hot”)-graph - er
--Take loads of money to capture these moments – It costs lots of money to pay someone to capture these moments.
--Aspire to have best photos of this moments – HOPE TO have the best photos of THESE moments
“Aspire” is when you want to reach a goal in self-improvement, such as, “I aspire to stop complaining all the time,” or “I aspire to be a restaurant owner when I grow up.”

Best wishes as you continue to practice!

Describe a present you have given someone.
You should say:

Who you gave it to
What kind of present it was
How it compared to other presents you have given
Explain why you decided to give this particular gift.


please exhilarate a band to understand my position and how much I need to work.