Ryan nd other evaluate task 1 : pie chart

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chadny013
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Ryan nd other evaluate task 1 : pie chart

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The pie charts represent the proportion of people of two country by categories them in three different age group. The charts also predicted the population after 50 years. No obvious correlation between the charts of two countries.
In Yemen, from 46.3% proportion 15-59 years age group is second position in 2000, where after 50 years later it will be increase by 11%. Equally, the elderly aged people(+60) followed the same pattern rise from (3.6 to 5.7 %) 2000 to 2050. On the other hand, early aged group (0-14) in the highest position (50%) in 2000 and surprisingly it is predicted to decline at 37% in 2050.
However, for Italy it is totally opposite scenario. 15-59 years age people achieved a dominating position in 2000 and it will remain at same position with different numbers. Conversely, age group of 0-14 will decrease from its 2000 year position by 3%( 14.3 to 11.5%) . Moreover, it is interestingly notice that, older aged people only have proportion of 24.1 % in 2000, where it is auspice to be around double by 2050(42.3%).
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Re: Ryan nd other evaluate task 1 : pie chart

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chadny013 wrote:The pie charts represent (<-- are there two pie charts?)the proportion of people of two countries by age group. The charts also predict the population after 50 years. There are no obvious correlations between the charts.
In Yemen, 46.3% of the population were in the 15-59 years age group in 2000. This number is predicted to increase by 11% by 2000. Equally, the 60+ age group followed the same pattern from 3.6 to 5.7 % in 2000 compared to 2050. On the other hand, the 0-14 year old group had the highest percentage, 50%, in 2000 which is,surprisingly, predicted to drop to 37% in 2050.
However, Italy is experiencing the opposite scenario. The 15-59 year old group achieved a dominating position in 2000, and it is predicted that it willremain the biggest group. Conversely, the percentage of 0-14 year olds will decrease from its 2000 year position by 3% (14.3 to 11.5%) . Moreover, it is interesting to note that the oldest age group[/color only account for 24.1% of the population in 2000, and is expected to almost double to 42.3% by 2050.


Hi chadny013,

This was a bit difficult to evaluate because I couldn't see the charts you were describing. However, you did a good job of comparing population in 2000 and 2050. Well done.

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Re: Ryan nd other evaluate task 1 : pie chart

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Thanks a lot for ur reply.. I was waiting for that. My exam in next week. Can u tell me how much i can get by this writing??
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