Task II

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Muxtar
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Task II

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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

People have different view about whether it is much better to obey traditions of new country when tourists visit to or these people have to be respected both governments and individuals of tourists receiving country. Although there are convincing points in favor of adopting local customs and behaviors, I personally believe that all nations should be careful in behaving with foreign guests.
Opponents of this idea think that visitors from other countries should adapt local traditions and customs in order to be respected by local inhabitants. It is undoubtedly impossible for them to get to know our habits, traditions deeply, but they may attempt to behave carefully to some extent. Doing by this, it would be an opportunity for them to get on very well with native people and also do better social activities, such as attending in parties by being invited to wedding ceremonies and other useful connections. Moreover, When they eager to follow local habits that are carried out compulsory in new country they may be able to enjoy learning more interesting things, such as deep history of nations, modern sigh-seeing places and their uniqueness.
Supporters of this argument claim that guests receiving country should welcome to overseas. There is no doubt that visiting to other nations can be negative impact on visitors . For instance, they are exposed a rich variety of traditions, cultures and customs. For this reason, both individuals and government should be extremely understandably with them. By doing this country can attract people from numerous countries in the future. In Addition, hospitality of our citizens to any representative of other countries is spotlight of world as a prominent peaceful nation. Most countries around the world also try to create good impressions initially on tourists and meeting their cultural shock normally is obvious example of this.

To sum up, it seems to me that all visitors have to be approached deliberately because they might feel single –handed on away from their mother land. Human beings are being demanded to respect each-other.
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Muxtar wrote:Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

People have different views about whether it is better to obey the traditions of a country when visiting as a sign of respect for the government and country. Although there are convincing points in favor of adopting local customs and behaviors, I personally believe that all nations should be careful in how they behave with foreign guests.

Opponents of this idea think that visitors from other countries should adopt local traditions and customs in order to be respected by local inhabitants. It is undoubtedly impossible for them to get to know our habits and traditions well, but they may attempt to behave carefully to some extent. By doing this, it is an opportunity for them to get on very well with native people and also take part in more social activities, such as attending parties by being invited to wedding ceremonies and other useful connections. Moreover, when they show eagerness to follow local habits, they may be able to enjoy learning other interesting things, such as less well knownhistory and modern sight-seeing places.

Supporters of this argument claim that countries should welcome overseas guests. There is no doubt that visiting other nations can have a negative impact on visitors. (<-- I'm not sure what you mean. A negative impact is bad. In the next sentence, you mention good things. I think you mean:
There is no doubt that some tourists can make a bad impression on the country they are visiting.
For instance, they are exposed to a rich variety of traditions, culture and customs. For this reason, both individuals andthe government should be extremely understanding with them. By doing this, a country can attract people from numerous other countries in the future. In addition, the hospitality of our citizens to any representative of other countries is a way to show the world the country is a peaceful nation. Most countries around the world also try to create good impressions initially on tourists and trying to reducetheir cultural shock is an obvious example of this.

To sum up, it seems to me that all visitors have to be approached deliberately because they might feel lonely away from their mother land. Human beings should respect each-other.
Hi Muxtar,

This is a good start, but your points are confusing. Your points about the positive aspects of adopting the local customs was great, but you didn't talk about the negative aspect. You gave your opinion in the conclusion, but didn't agree or disagree with the original question. Don't forget to answer the original question.

Well done,
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hi Flick
what score you would give this?
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