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amr ramadan
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plz assess my writing task 1

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This graph shows the amounts of fish , lamb, beef and chicken which are consumed in a certain europian country from 1979 to 2004. the amounts are measured in grams per person per week . In general , It can be seen that fish consumption didn't change greatly throughout the period , while other types showed some flactuations .
Beef consumption was the largest one in 1979 as it was around 225 gm , then it showed flactuating manner till it reached about 100 in 2004.
While Chicken and lamb consumption started nearly at the same point of 150gm in 1979 , chicken was consumed more and more in the next years till it became the first one in 2004 by about 250 gm. In contrast , lamb consumption showed constant decline and was just above 50gm in 2004 .Fish consumpion in 1979 was just above 50gm and still around the same amount allover the period .
In conclusion , we can notice that in the beginning of the period beef was the largest consumed type while at the end it was chicken , but fish remained the least type.
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