Task II

[Muxtar]

Question: Compare the advantage and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information.State which you consider to be most effective.comics,radio,books,television,films,theatre.

Nowadays,it is becoming more common for people to use some tools of media,such as comics,books,radio,television ,etc.Although there are some convincing arguments in favor of drawbacks of them,I believe that advantages outweigh disadvantages in any case.

Although We are living in the century of technology,there is no doubt that books will remain their position.Many people have a great interest to get much more information from different types of books,especially among young generation.It is obvious fact that many people benefit from them in different ways.They help us to be intellectual,getting numerous secrets of life,how to behave with strange people in various circumstances and in short term,they provide us with comprehensive experience of our life.Television and radio also have a positive impact from that perspective in which everyone can inform about different parts of world without going anywhere.Also,they have a chance to have access to the internet throughout television or listen to news,music,interesting programmes with just sitting on a sofa.

There are also several drawbacks of them.Reading books may cause reduction of visual ability.A large group of people complain about negative effects of reading,especially students studying colleague or university.On the other hand,many parents prefer to spend more time in front of Tv in which this case encourage children to join their parents and eventually they are deprived parents care or cant draw their attention to homework. Radio may bring about the feeling of boring because of being not visually.

To sum up,I believe that advantages of them outweigh drawbacks in any case and we should try to use their advantages to being beneficial.

[andytruong1202]

Question: Compare the advantage and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information.State which you consider to be most effective.comics,radio,books,television,films,theatre.

Nowadays,it is becoming more common for people to use some tools of media,such as comics,books,radio,television ,etc.Although there are some convincing arguments in favor of drawbacks of them,I believe that advantages outweigh disadvantages in any case.

Although We are living in the century of technology,there is no doubt that books will remain their position.Many people have a great interest to get much more information from different types of books,especially among young generation.It is obvious fact that many people benefit from them in different ways.They help us to be intellectual,getting numerous secrets of life,how to behave with strange people in various circumstances and in short term,they provide us with comprehensive experience of our life.Television and radio also have a positive impact from that perspective in which everyone can inform about different parts of world without going anywhere.Also,they have a chance to have access to the internet throughout television or listen to news,music,interesting programmes with just sitting on a sofa.

There are also several drawbacks of them.Reading books may cause reduction of visual ability.A large group of people complain about negative effects of reading,especially students studying colleague or university.On the other hand,many parents prefer to spend more time in front of Tv in which this case encourage children to join their parents and eventually they are deprived parents care or cant draw their attention to homework. Radio may bring about the feeling of boring because of being not visually.

To sum up,I believe that advantages of them outweigh drawbacks in any case and we should try to use their advantages to being beneficial.

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You need to state 3 different media and compare their advantages and disadvantages.
Omitted the "s" for some words in plural forms.
Did not use articles effectively.
Unable to use passive forms.
Didn't answer the question directly.
Frequent occurrence of grammar mistakes.
Wrong use of "in which".
How the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Overall: 5.5+