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Topic :-
Mistakes, obviously, show us what needs improvement. Without mistakes, how would we know what we had to work on?”
Are mistakes the portals of discovery or progress?

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Everyone wants to succeed in today's world.It is important that one learns from their or others experience to avoid committing same mistakes again.While some people think mistakes shows us the path to propagate further, but there are few opponents to this idea. The essay will first discuss the potential positive impact that mistakes can have, along with supporting arguments, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

There are several reasons how mistakes can be helpful to an individual. Firstly, It can be a learning experience for them. It not only helps the individual to be cautious but also works as a catalyst. For instance, a child learns from his parent's experience to avoid repeating those mistakes. It helps in handling the obstacles more easily while attaining their goals.

Another reason is, it helps in planning more effectively. Professionals learn through each other experiences and share it through various mediums. It helps in anticipating the risk involved with a better mitigation plan.For instance, an amateur driver should understand the basics of driving and rules of the road to avoid accidents. It will boost his confidence while driving.

To conclude, it is evident that mistakes show the path of progress. However, it is important that one should consider not repeating the same mistakes to reduce the turnaround.

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Topic :-
Mistakes, obviously, show us what needs improvement. Without mistakes, how would we know what we had to work on?”
Are mistakes the portals of discovery or progress?

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Everyone wants to succeed in today's world. It is important that one learns from their or others' experiences to avoid committing the same mistakes again. While some people think mistakes shows us the path to improvement, there are a few opponents to this idea. This essay will first discuss the potential positive impact that mistakes can have, along with supporting arguments, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

There are several ways mistakes can be helpful to an individual. Firstly, they can be a learning experience. They not only help the individual to be cautious, they also work as a catalyst. For instance, a child learns from his parent's experience to avoid repeating those mistakes. It helps in handling obstacles more easily while attaining their goals.

Another reason is, it helps in planning more effectively. Professionals learn through each others' experiences and share this knowledge through various mediums. It helps in anticipating the risks involved with planned actions. For instance, a new driver should understand the basics of driving and the rules of the road to avoid accidents. This will boost his confidence while driving.

To conclude, it is evident that mistakes show the path of progress. However, it is important that one should consider not repeating the same mistakes to reduce the turnaround.(<--I don't understand this sentence. What turnaround?)