David, Please review writing task 2 for GT and rate it as per IELTS band score.

[Eternal_SSS]

Question: Nowadays education quality is very low. Some people think we should encourage our students to evaluate and cticise their teachers. Others believe that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss on both sides.

In recent years it has become obvious, that low quality of education is and issue many people feel strongly about. Some group of people think that students can disagree and argue with teachers while others reject.

Some people support the view, that students could criticise teachers owing to some reasons. Firstly, this makes some pressure on teachers. Therefore, they always have to improve their knowledge and keep their mind in shape. Secondly, student can be a genius, so he might easily be much clever than his teacher. For instance, a lot of genious scientists had a conflicts with teachers, in the past.

On the other hand, other experts oppose this argument, due to some reasons. Firstly, such situation could be confusing for a teacher. Since, it would be really hard to manage class with up to twenty or more students, especially, if some students were arguing. Secondly, it might have a negative impact on other students. Therefore, they cannot understand lessons, and lost any interest. Moreover, teacher's authority would be decreased by such action.

According the above-mentioned reasons, therefore, it is hard to determine which point of view is ore suitable. Thus, some balance should be implemented to improve education system.

[David.IELTS.Examiner]

Hello!

The question only asks you to discuss both sides, which you do, but in a real IELTS test you are almost certainly going to be asked to give your opinion too.

Why does class size matter, with regard to this question? Why would students not be able to understand?

Overall, I think that this essay has key weaknesses in the second main paragraph. However, vocabulary and grammar are reasonable.

All the best,
David

[Eternal_SSS]

Thank you very much for Your help, David.