Writing Task 2 "Essay"- Please David could you score it? Thanks

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cescoyin
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Writing Task 2 "Essay"- Please David could you score it? Thanks

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COUNTRIES ARE BECOMING MORE AND MORE SIMILAR BECAUSE PEOPLE ARE ABLE TO BUY THE SAME PRODUCTS ANYWHERE IN THE WORLD. DO YOU THINK IS A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT?

Nowadays is a common fact being able to find any kind of goods from all over the world. Usually same products are delivered to different countries, thanks to global market, for selling purposes, covering a widespread demand of the same kinds of goods.
Along with this type of global economic market, there is a locals production strictly linked with the country that suffers this type of competitions. Furthermore many typical goods could be forgotten, loosing indeed a kind of regional/national identity.
It is believed that this situation has a strong negative effect, the reasons will be analysed further.

One one hand local goods consumption, such as food, dresses should be promoted from councils and governments, allowing only a small part of goods importations take place in the market.
For example instead of buy a Chinese wool pullover, it could be bought a pullover made in home (if produced).
This example embodies the idea of small economic realities development. As a result more consumption of imported goods would destroy this possible outcome of locals economies.

On the other hand local produced products, guarantee a continuous remainder of national or regional histories.
For example the most famous wool coming from Scotland represents not only an antique practice, rather a true icon of a nation, embodying a national identity. This example fortifies the idea that consumption of product home-produced are valuable in terms of tradition and originality. It is obvious that a typical good of Pakistan, cannot be fully "understood" in another state, since its history is hidden and neglected.

It has been analysed different reasons that does not support mass production products, sold all around the world, rather a more local related shopping, this approach can only thrives businesses run by national people, highlighting traditions and history of our countries,
It is expected that people will undertake a more aware approach when shopping.

THANKS TO EVERYONE THAT WOULD SCORE MY ESSAY! I'LL TRY TO HELP AS WELL :D
cescoyin
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Re: Writing Task 2 "Essay"- Please David could you score it? Thanks

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Please nobody willing to assess the essay? Thanks in advance to whoever would correct it. 8-)
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