Moving on to task 1. Asking for advice, many thanks to the examiners who kindly help us!!!

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NewAgeEnglish
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Moving on to task 1. Asking for advice, many thanks to the examiners who kindly help us!!!

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The two maps illustrate a small island before and after it is constructed into a tourist destination. It is obvious that lots of construction has been done there.

On the first map, the island was free of any buildings or man-made structures. There were trees on it, and a natural beach to the narrower left end. The island has a long oval shape. Overall it is less than three hundred meters long and the wider end measures around one hundred meters across.

On the bottom map, a lot of buildings and facilities have been built. The two large buildings, which serve as a reception and a restaurant respectively, are connected by a vehicle track to the Pier, which stretches into the sea right in front of the reception. Together, these three structures divide the island into two parts. The right half, which is the larger half, now has a group of nine small huts. These huts are accommodations. There are another group of six huts on the left half of the island. The surrounding sea also has changed a bit. There is a swimming area just outside the beach, and some yachts can be seen around the Pier. Although so many changes have occurred, the trees are well preserved. Their original number and place have not changed at all.

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Re: Moving on to task 1. Asking for advice, many thanks to the examiners who kindly help us!!!

Post by David.IELTS.Examiner »

Hello!

You have missed a couple of points - footpaths and the location of these facilities in relation to each other. We can see that the report is a little short as a result.

All the best,
David
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