Describe your favourite Web site
why you like it
how it is different from other Web sites
what you usually search for in it
Please rate my recording which is about favourite website
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abbasazarmehrput
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Please rate my recording which is about favourite website
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Re: Please rate my recording which is about favourite website
Hi, abbasazarmehrput.
This website sounds really helpful for your studies! Thanks for sharing.
I would encourage you to speed up your talking a bit, as has been mentioned before. You are capable of doing so, I believe, without people not being able to understand you. You will still be understandable if you speed up your rate of speech.
Here are some notes for this particular recording:
Let me give you example – AN example
Informative information and feedback – “Inform” is repetitive here.
In which areas you are weak at – areas in which you are weak
Resultses – results (wrong plural form)
I can exercise with that – I can do those exercises. / I can practice with those materials.
What all candidates are talking about different centers – what all candidates are saying about different centers
Speed is still a concern.
The first part that I go – the first part that I go to is. . .
Can have a feedback about – can have feedback about (“Feedback” is a – non-count noun, so you don’t need “a” before it.)
Best wishes as you continue to practice!
This website sounds really helpful for your studies! Thanks for sharing.
I would encourage you to speed up your talking a bit, as has been mentioned before. You are capable of doing so, I believe, without people not being able to understand you. You will still be understandable if you speed up your rate of speech.
Here are some notes for this particular recording:
Let me give you example – AN example
Informative information and feedback – “Inform” is repetitive here.
In which areas you are weak at – areas in which you are weak
Resultses – results (wrong plural form)
I can exercise with that – I can do those exercises. / I can practice with those materials.
What all candidates are talking about different centers – what all candidates are saying about different centers
Speed is still a concern.
The first part that I go – the first part that I go to is. . .
Can have a feedback about – can have feedback about (“Feedback” is a – non-count noun, so you don’t need “a” before it.)
Best wishes as you continue to practice!
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Cliff.IELTS.Examiner
- IELTS Examiner
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Re: Please rate my recording which is about favourite website
This meets all the criteria for band 7. You start off a little slowly, and there are quite a few hesitations These hesitations keep you out of the 8 band range which requires that your speech be “fluent” At 7, “some hesitation may occur, often mid sentence”.
You have a good lexical resource, and some knowledge of less common words and collocations. All this fits squarely with the 7 band. Grammar is very good really, very few errors, good range of sentence structures, but a few errors. Pronunciation is also a strong 7.
To improve, you need to become a little more fluent, with longer runs of uninterrupted speech. That way you’ll make the 8 band in FC, and it will also lift your pronunciation. With all the hesitations, you are unable to meet the band 8 criterion “able to sustain appropriate rhythm.
You have a good lexical resource, and some knowledge of less common words and collocations. All this fits squarely with the 7 band. Grammar is very good really, very few errors, good range of sentence structures, but a few errors. Pronunciation is also a strong 7.
To improve, you need to become a little more fluent, with longer runs of uninterrupted speech. That way you’ll make the 8 band in FC, and it will also lift your pronunciation. With all the hesitations, you are unable to meet the band 8 criterion “able to sustain appropriate rhythm.