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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.


The rising number of population in metropolitan places has caused significant repercussions. This has resulted to the incessant spread of pollution and an escalation of poverty. However, there are several preventive measures that the government can implement in order to address this social problem.
Primarily, it is often said that an increase of inhabitants in a well established region is accompanied by a rise in pollution. In cosmopolitan regions, there are impoverished groups who live in squalor. Some of them have chosen to settle in the city because they believe that that they can easily find an employment in this place. For example, in the Philippines, there are poor individuals who built homes in the boulevard of Metro Manila, thus contributing to the amount of waste. Clearly, these people dispose their rubbish to the ocean, which may harm marine animals. In addition, it is apparent that most of the less affluent cohort has large number of families. These members have personal needs, which cause burden to the brad winner of the family. Since the city has number of educated workers, impecunious group often seems to struggle in searching a better employment. To illustrate, they cannot procure a descent job since they did not finish their education. Hence, these people will suffer from poverty, which results to higher incidence of famine.
However, it can never be denied that the government can implement platforms, which will mitigate the social dilemma. First of all, they can increase the number of employment offers in suburbs such as providing them lands that can be cultivated. Therefore, impoverished people will not aggregate in the city. Secondly, the government can provide programs such as sex education to these individual. As an instance, public health practioners can orient them the appropriate use of contraceptives, which will control the number of family members.
To conclude, the proliferation of pollution and the exacerbation of poverty are the negative ramifications of a rise of residents in the city. Nevertheless, government’s projects can curtail this social issue. It is very likely that the poverty will b curbed if the government provides them job opportunities in suburbs.
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The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Nowadays, youngsters are engaging in delinquent activities, which cause pressure in the society. It can be ascribed to the lack of parental supervision and the negative influences of peers. However, this social problem can be tackled by the employers and parents.
Primarily, is it often said that youngsters may opt to negative vices if the parents will not monitor their children’s activities. Evidently, there are parents who have hectic schedule in their workplace, thus neglecting the responsibilities to their children. Because of inadequate guidance, these youngsters socialize with other people in the society. For instance, in school, children develop relationship with their friends as it is considered their second home. A group of friends shares the same habits and passions such as venturing to illegal substances and criminal behaviors. It might be their way to retaliate to their parents, who do not spend time with them. These children may eel resentment due to the fact that they might have the feeling of being unloved and unwanted. Therefore, they will perform nefarious actions such that they will gain the attention of their parents, and make them regret for being preoccupied to their employment.
However, it can never be denied that this social dilemma can be addressed by the parents and the employers. First of all, parents can give more attention to their children by have a weekly family outing to different places. For example, they could eat together in a luxurious restaurant or watch a movie in order to regain the aloof relationship. These parents can show to their children that they are important despite of their busy schedule. Secondly, employers can curtail the employment hours of those employees who have children. As a result, these workers can spend more time to their children.
To conclude, there is an escalation of crimes brought by youngsters, who have lack of supervision from their parents. Nevertheless, it is apparent that managers can help those employees, who have children, to allocate more time to their family. It is very likely that frequent family bonding can eradicate the negative behaviors of their children.
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chinoy190 wrote:Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.


The rising population in metropolitan areas has caused significant repercussions. This has resulted in the incessant spread of pollution and an escalation of poverty. However, there are several preventive measures that the government can implement in order to address this social problem.
Primarily, it is often said that an increase of inhabitants in a well established region is accompanied by a rise in pollution. In cosmopolitan regions, there are impoverished groups who live in squalor. Some of these groups have chosen to settle in the city because they believe that that they can easily find an employment in the area. For example, in the Philippines, there are poor individuals who built homes in the boulevard of Metro Manila, thus contributing to the amount of waste. Clearly, these people dispose of their rubbish in the ocean, which may harm marine animals. In addition, it is apparent that most of the less affluent cohort have large families. These members have personal needs, which are a burden on the bread winner of the family. Since the city has a number of educated workers, poorer, less educated workers often struggle to find better employment. To illustrate, they cannot procure a decent job since they did not finish their education. Hence, these people will suffer from poverty, which results in a higher incidence of famine.
However, the government can implement prgrams, which will mitigate the social dilemma. First of all, they can increase the number of employment offers in suburbs such as providing land that can be cultivated. Therefore, impoverished people will not aggregate in the city. Secondly, the government can provide programs such as sex education to these individuals. For example, public health practitioners can inform people in the appropriate use of contraceptives, which will help to control family size.
To conclude, the proliferation of pollution and the exacerbation of poverty are negative ramifications of a rise of residents in the city. Nevertheless, government projects can curtail this social issue. It is very likely that poverty will be curbed if the government provides them job opportunities in suburbs.
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chinoy190 wrote:The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Nowadays, youngsters are engaging in delinquent activities, which cause pressure in the society. This behavior can be ascribed to the lack of parental supervision and the negative influences of peers. However, this social problem can be tackled by employers and parents.
Primarily, is it often said that youngsters may adopt negative vices if their parents do not monitor their childrens' activities. Evidently, there are parents who have hectic work schedules, thus neglecting their children. Because of inadequate guidance, these youngsters socialize with other people in the society. For instance, in school, children develop relationships with their friends as it is considered their second home. A group of friends shares the same habits and passions, such as taking illegal substances or indulging in criminal behaviors. It might be their way of retaliating against their parents, who do not spend time with them. These children may feel resentment due to the fact that they feel unloved and unwanted. Therefore, they will perform nefarious actions in order to gain the attention of their parents, and make them regret being preoccupied with their work.
However, this social dilemma can be addressed by parents and employers. First of all, parents can give more attention to their children by having a weekly family outing to different places. For example, they could eat together in a luxurious restaurant or watch a movie in order to rebuild the damaged relationship. These parents can show their children that they are important despite their busy schedule. Secondly, employers can curtail the employment hours of those employees who have children. As a result, these workers can spend more time with their children.
To conclude, there is an escalation of crimes committed by youngsters, who have a lack of supervision from their parents. Nevertheless, it is apparent that managers can help those employees who have children to allocate more time to their family. It is very likely that frequent family bonding can eradicate the negative behaviors of their children.
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The table describes on how the females who belong to different age category spend their free time. It can be seen generally that each age group have different preferred pastime activities. It is illustrated that watching TV and entertaining are the most popular activities performed by females with age 20-50.
First of all, in age 20-25, entertaining is the most popular pastime habit, which reaches 38 per cent. It is greater than watching TV, reading, sports and shopping, at about 14 per cent, 11 per cent, 17 per cent and 16 per cent accordingly. Gardening, cooking and sewing have nearly comparable figures, ranging from one to two per cent. However, in age 26-30, entertaining decreases in popularity, accounting for about 20 per cent. It is equal to the figure reached in watching T and is slightly higher by five per cent in shopping. Sports has the highest proportion at 26 per cent, which is five times as large as the rate for cooking ( five per cent). Reading has a rate of nine per cent, which is thrice the figure of gardening and is quite larger than cooking and sewing. Shopping has a figure of 5 per cent.
In age 31-40, watching TV becomes the most common pastime habit, at 26 per cent. Sports, which is very popular in age 26-30, declines to two per cent, which is five times the percentage of cooking ( ten per cent). Reading, shopping, and entertaining have similar statistics, ranging from 17 per cent to 20 per cent. Nonetheless, in age 41-50, cooking and entertaining fall to about 16 per cent and ten per cent respectively, while cooking and gardening marginally rise to roughly 16 per cent and seven per cent accordingly. Watching T has still the largest proportion in this age group, comprising 37 per cent.
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The table describes on how the females who belong to different age category spend their free time. It can be seen generally that each age group have different preferred pastime activities. It is illustrated that watching TV and entertaining are the most popular activities performed by females with age 20-50.
First of all, in age 20-25, entertaining is the most popular pastime habit, which reaches 38 per cent. It is greater than watching TV, reading, sports and shopping, at about 14 per cent, 11 per cent, 17 per cent and 16 per cent accordingly. Gardening, cooking and sewing have nearly comparable figures, ranging from one to two per cent. However, in age 26-30, entertaining decreases in popularity, accounting for about 20 per cent. It is equal to the figure reached in watching T and is slightly higher by five per cent in shopping. Sports has the highest proportion at 26 per cent, which is five times as large as the rate for cooking ( five per cent). Reading has a rate of nine per cent, which is thrice the figure of gardening and is quite larger than cooking and sewing. Shopping has a figure of 5 per cent.
In age 31-40, watching TV becomes the most common pastime habit, at 26 per cent. Sports, which is very popular in age 26-30, declines to two per cent, which is five times the percentage of cooking ( ten per cent). Reading, shopping, and entertaining have similar statistics, ranging from 17 per cent to 20 per cent. Nonetheless, in age 41-50, cooking and entertaining fall to about 16 per cent and ten per cent respectively, while cooking and gardening marginally rise to roughly 16 per cent and seven per cent accordingly. Watching T has still the largest proportion in this age group, comprising 37 per cent.
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thank you mam..i highly apprecitae your effort.. :) :) :)
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