In some countries young people are encouraged to work and travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
In today’s world, individuals with versatile caliber are highly preferred. So, many countries are persuading their young citizens to involve in extra activity, namely job and travel, after completing school and before commencing university studies. Whether this approach will create a plausible ramification or constitute a unplatable result is highly contentious topic. The merits and drawbacks of this argument will be analyzed for viability in following order.
On the one hand, while in school students have childish thinking and behavior, entailing them on different areas would constitute maturity and develop professional attitude. A tangible of this is Mr. Danny Webber. After visiting birth place of Budda: Limbuni, Webber learned the proper manner of interacting with people, and devolved courage to deal with difficulties in life through the teaching of Lord Budda. It goes without saying that youths can grasp ultimate knowledge and understanding through travelling, which their school books cannot deliver. Therefore, the approach of immersing young people in extra field is difficult to debunk.
On the other hand, as adolescents start to earn money through work, they may incline towards bad habits: smoking; alcohol consumption; drug addiction and so on. The data accumulated from a research on purchase of cigarette in Pokhara, which shows that most of the young cigarette consumers are job holders, embodies this idea perfectly. In light of this, it is obvious that many young earners will probably march on wrong path. What this means is that the notion of immersing youths on different area of earning is undoubtedly preposterous.
After hashing out the pros and cons of this point of view, it is felt that adolescents should be involved in different areas to fortify their self knowledge and experience if they have leisure time. It is thus recommended that youths should utilize their free time to support their family financially, and reinforce their understanding on several areas.
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jesus wrote:In some countries young people are encouraged to work and travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
In today’s world, individuals with versatile skills are highly preferred. So, many countries are persuading their young citizens to get involved in extra activities, namely work and travel, after completing school and before commencing university studies. Whether this approach will create positive experiences or constitute an unplatable result is a highly contentious topic. The merits and drawbacks of this argument will be analyzed for viability in the paragraphs below.
On the one hand, while in school students have childish thinking and behavior. Encouraging them to travel would help them to mature and develop a professional attitude. A example of this is Mr. Danny Webber. After visiting the birth place of Budda: Limbuni, Webber learned the proper manner of interacting with people, and built the courage to deal with difficulties in life through the teaching of Lord Budda. It goes without saying that youths can grasp knowledge and understanding through travelling, which their school books cannot deliver. Therefore, the approach of immersing young people in extra fields is difficult to debunk.
On the other hand, as adolescents start to earn money through work, they may take up bad habits: smoking; alcohol consumption; drug addiction and so on. The data accumulated from research on the purchase of cigarettes in Pokhara, showing that most of the young cigarette consumers are job holders, embodies this idea perfectly. In light of this, it is obvious that many young earners will probably be tempted by the wrong path. What this means is that the notion of immersing youths in different areas of experience has its drawbacks.
After analyzing the pros and cons of this argument, it is felt that adolescents should experience different areas to fortify their self knowledge and understanding if they have leisure time. It is thus recommended that youths should utilize their free time to support their family financially, and reinforce their understanding in several areas.
Words = 313
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Dear Jesus,
Have you heard anything about the IELTS tests which were cancelled due to the earthquake in Nepal? Are the exams still pending or already been conducted ? Do you have any information??
Have you heard anything about the IELTS tests which were cancelled due to the earthquake in Nepal? Are the exams still pending or already been conducted ? Do you have any information??
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Anupamaa wrote:Dear Jesus,
Have you heard anything about the IELTS tests which were cancelled due to the earthquake in Nepal? Are the exams still pending or already been conducted ? Do you have any information??
Hi Anupama,
British council is rescheduling those cancelled exams. You can contact them through phone and email. In my case, i contacted them through Facebook.
Please follow this thread, and share your information to them with your details. They will accommodate you somewhere in upcoming exams.
https://www.facebook.com/BritishCouncilNepal?fref=ts
contact number : 014410545
All the best for your exam,
Jesus