Taks 1 - General - Personal letter after migration to a friend

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mhdganji
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Taks 1 - General - Personal letter after migration to a friend

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Hi every body
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You migrated to another country.
Task: Write a letter to your friend to describe your present life and tell him/her why you choose this country.


Dear Lina

I am sorry I have not written for so long. Heavy work load and new life problems have made me so busy that I hardly have free time.

As you remember, I chose Denmark for migration because many people mentioned it as a safe, modern and pretty country. I am so happy to tell you that all of these have been proved to me to be true in the last three years. Moreover, people are so kind and always helpful to new comers to make them comfortable and stress free. The climate in this part of world is almost pleasant all of the times and because of many green areas and very few automobiles and motorcycles used, pollution is dramatically decreased and you can always enjoy clean streets and beautiful parks with fresh air. Of course, there are problems especially for me that lived in a crowded city like Tehran and maybe seems funny to you, but the matter that annoys me so much is a very quiet town which I am not used to. Anyway, overall life conditions is so much better here and I am happy with my choice of Denmark as my new residence.

I Hope to hear from you soon

Best wishes,
Mohammad
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mhdganji wrote: You migrated to another country.
Task: Write a letter to your friend to describe your present life and tell him/her why you choose this country.


Dear Lina

I am sorry I have not written for so long. A heavy work load and new challenges have made me so busy that I hardly have free time.

As you remember, I chose to move to Denmark because many people mentioned it as a safe, modern and pretty country. I am so happy to tell you that all of these have been proved to me to be true in the last three years. Moreover, people are so kind and always helpful to newcomers to make them comfortable and stress free. The climate in this part of world is pleasant all of the time, and because of the many green areas and very few automobiles and motorcycles used, pollution is dramatically decreased and you can always enjoy clean streets and beautiful parks with fresh air. Of course, there are problems, especially for me who lived in a crowded city like Tehran. This may seem funny to you, but the thing that annoys me the most is the peace and quiet, which I am not used to. Anyway, overall life is so much better here and I am happy with my choice of Denmark as my new residence.

I hope to hear from you soon.

Best wishes,
Mohammad
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