Academic Task 1 - Bar chart (Please help to check) Thanks!

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The bar chart compares the worldwide sales of games software, CDs and DVDs over a period of 4 years.

In 2000, CDs dominated the IT industry by achieving 35 billion of global sales. The global sales figure was doubled as compared to DVDs and games software at 18 billion and 13 billion respectively. Despite at its peak, the sales trend for CDs then subsequently decreased slightly during the 4 years period, where its demand dropped to approximately 32 billion in 2003.

In contrast, demand for DVDs is lesser as compared to CDs. In fact, it only managed to obtain global sales of 18 billion in year 2000. Despite being the runner up in the category, the sales trend for DVDs seemed positive, where the year-to-year sales figures were increasing sharply to 31 billion at the end of the period. This proved to be a drastic sales growth for DVDs as it reduced the sales gap against its core competitor.

Finally, games software had seen a considerably growth in its global sales. Although its popularity was not as high as CDs and DVDs, it managed to reach its sales peak at slightly below 20% in year 2003.

In conclusion, the global sales for CDs reduced whereas the sales for DVDs improved steadily from year 2000 to 2003

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The bar chart compares the worldwide sales of games software, CDs and DVDs over a period of 4 years.

In 2000, CDs dominated the IT industry, making 35 billion dollars in global sales. The global sales figure was double DVD sales of 18 billion dollars, and triple games software sales of 13 billion dollars. Despite at its peak, the sales trend for CDs then subsequently decreased slightly during the 4 years period, where its demand dropped to approximately 32 billion in 2003.(<--Reword to: "However, sales steadily decreased over the next three years to 32 billion dollars in 2003.")

In contrast, demand for DVDs grew from 2000 to 2003. In fact, it only managed to obtain global sales of 18 billion in year 2000.(<--I do not understand this sentence.) Despite being the runner up in the category, the sales trend for DVDs seemed positive, where the year-to-year sales figures were increasing sharply to 31 billion at the end of the period.(<--Reword to: "By 2003, DVD sales made 31 billion dollars globally.") This proved to be a drastic sales growth for DVDs as it reduced the sales gap against its core competitor.

Finally, games software had seen a considerable growth in its global sales. Although its popularity was not as high as CDs and DVDs, it managed to reach its sales peak at slightly below 20 billion dollars in year 2003.

In conclusion, the global sales for CDs dropped, while the sales for DVDs and games software improved steadily from 2000 to 2003.

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The bar chart gives the information about the global sales of games software,CDs and DVD or video from 2000 to 2003.In trend,there was a fluctuant trend in the number of CDs,while the other two DVD or video and Games software saw an upward trend.
Look at the chart we can clearly see that,the trend for Games software was similar to the DVD or video.Games software started at 13 billion dollars in 2000 and then increased slightly between 2001 to 2003.DVD or video began at 18 billion dollars in 2000 and then rise to over 20 billion dollars in 2001.After that it continue to grew up from 2002 to 2003.In 2003,DVD or video reached a peak of 30 billion dollars.
CDs started at the highest point of 35 billion dollars in the first year.However,CDs decreased slightly but in general remained steady at 32 billion dollars.